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Revenge

Don't mess with a Chihuahua.

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Comment from Esther Brown
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I really liked this. Made me think of my cat Hansel peeing on my hubby's Harley and on his boot.
Hansel never took to him. Writing exactly 50 words seems like it would be a challenge. I tend to be too wordy...
Do you have a Chloe or Ralph in your life?

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024

Comment from Ginda Simpson
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This is some serious revenge being planned for the boyfriend. They must have been some seriously good treats he made the mistake of throwing out. A fun flash here.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2024

Comment from papa55mike
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Well, that ought to run him off or get the dogs replaced. The dogs must have that certain bad feeling only they know. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2024

Comment from Navada
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Well, this sounds like the very definition of teamwork. Purposeful collaboration has its place in the inner workings of most teams - why should it be any different with chihuahuas? :)

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2024

Comment from jessizero
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This fifty word story was adorable. I can picture the two dogs plotting their actions, and it's so cute! I love the picture you added, as well. It really added to the story. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

Comment from LJbutterfly
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Okay! This guy is done. I grew up with many dogs. My dad once had sixteen dogs at one time. I don't know how they do it, but they plot and join forces to do stuff. Your chihuahua and friend will get the guy who dared throw a dog's treat out the window. Great story. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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humorous poem
puppies are quite the talkers
I enjoyed reading the humor between the puppies/it could be bad news when the fellow approaches
required word count
image is great

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Well, it's not like the creep didn't have it coming, right? The nerve of him not even being a true member of the family and taking it upon himself to throw out Chloe's treat. Mom needs to dump that loser and fast!!

Definitely "humor" involved in this entry! Good luck to you at the polls.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Yes, that one on the right, Chloe, is the one who's going to bite his balls. I can see revenge in her eyes. Nicely read in your 50 word story. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

Comment from Mia Twysted
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I love the picture you have. I could see dogs having this conversation. There is reasons for them to do what they do. This would be a good scene in a animal movie.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024