The soulmate
soul mate18 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, Iza, it would be difficult for one to be truly the "soul mate." But who knows, stranger things have happened. Double dating might be a problem. Very creative, good luck in the contest. Terry.
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LOL, Iza, it would be difficult for one to be truly the "soul mate." But who knows, stranger things have happened. Double dating might be a problem. Very creative, good luck in the contest. Terry.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm guessing this must have been a contest entry since I didn't get it in my inbox. But either way, it's a great way to start off my day with a laugh. Thanks for sharing.
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I'm guessing this must have been a contest entry since I didn't get it in my inbox. But either way, it's a great way to start off my day with a laugh. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
Comment from Navada
That's an interesting concept for a story! It would obviously be difficult to have a private conversation, wouldn't it? Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest!
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That's an interesting concept for a story! It would obviously be difficult to have a private conversation, wouldn't it? Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
Comment from LJbutterfly
I wasn't expecting that ending, even though I saw the picture. What a horrible development when you're looking for a soulmate. There will always be someone listening in on your conversations. Plus, you get no privacy. Humorous story.
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I wasn't expecting that ending, even though I saw the picture. What a horrible development when you're looking for a soulmate. There will always be someone listening in on your conversations. Plus, you get no privacy. Humorous story.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
Comment from jessizero
This story in fifty words was cute. I definitely didn't see the "Siamese twin" twist coming. Thank you so much for sharing this little story, and best wishes to you.
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This story in fifty words was cute. I definitely didn't see the "Siamese twin" twist coming. Thank you so much for sharing this little story, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
Comment from Dawn Munro
I guess it would be a bit awkward. LOL. Yes, sound advice, "Be careful what you wish for..." Soul mate or not, I'd pass, and your protagonist has a streak of masochism in her, methinks. (LOL) Good luck in the contest.
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I guess it would be a bit awkward. LOL. Yes, sound advice, "Be careful what you wish for..." Soul mate or not, I'd pass, and your protagonist has a streak of masochism in her, methinks. (LOL) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
Comment from Wayne Fowler
What would it be like to love such a twin? I figure it would depend on the twin's nature and character, if the two were similar-natured. If you loved the nice one, but the other was a snotty brat, there might very well be a problem.
Well written story. Good luck in the contest.
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What would it be like to love such a twin? I figure it would depend on the twin's nature and character, if the two were similar-natured. If you loved the nice one, but the other was a snotty brat, there might very well be a problem.
Well written story. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
Comment from Begin Again
BOGO! Buy one, get one.... Now that would be a dreadful outcome for sure, especially since they are so difference in preferences. Besides, in romantic situations, three is definitely a crowd. This old lady would be telling the other one, "Turn your head and stop looking!" Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
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BOGO! Buy one, get one.... Now that would be a dreadful outcome for sure, especially since they are so difference in preferences. Besides, in romantic situations, three is definitely a crowd. This old lady would be telling the other one, "Turn your head and stop looking!" Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I've known a few Siamese twin relationships with a third always tagging behind. There is always an intruder and the other two who are getting along. The third wheel as they used to call them always feels left out of the equation and they are at least temporarily.
I have been in my younger years a third wheel and I always was the one to get hurt or stung as the case may be. So, watch out for the intruder. They always come back to bite you on the arsh.
Jesse
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I've known a few Siamese twin relationships with a third always tagging behind. There is always an intruder and the other two who are getting along. The third wheel as they used to call them always feels left out of the equation and they are at least temporarily.
I have been in my younger years a third wheel and I always was the one to get hurt or stung as the case may be. So, watch out for the intruder. They always come back to bite you on the arsh.
Jesse
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
Comment from Lisasview
This is so so fun mystery writer. And your image is hysterical... great that you found an image which represents your poem so well.
Good to have a morning laugh early in the morning here in Spain,
Lisasview
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This is so so fun mystery writer. And your image is hysterical... great that you found an image which represents your poem so well.
Good to have a morning laugh early in the morning here in Spain,
Lisasview
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
