Comment from Jeano

Excellent

You might have a winner with this one. There is so much to read between the lines. It leaves the reader of a measly eight syllables wondering what happened, where you're going from here. Struck me as a hook at the end of a chapter of a novel. Good job! Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Thank you for your kind review Jeno! And for your time- Bless

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Oh no she didn't! That's cold. But, it's also a very effective 1-6-1 poem. A good and creative, yet cruel idea. Maybe we can create a reply 1-6-1, for her. lol Excellent writing and image presentation! I enjoyed reviewing this.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024

Thank you for your kind review and for your time Alex ! Can't blame her...this guy is really good looking - She did send his saddle back! HaHa.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I liked what you did with your eight syllables. Some relationships are not worth saving, and it's best to move on. You somehow made it cute. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024

Thank you for your kind review Jessizero, and for your time - Bless