Take Nothing for Granted
A 50 word story12 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
ROFL! What a great way to start off my day! Thanks for sharing your cute little flash fiction piece that me back to being a boy, when I've actually seen that picture before. :-)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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ROFL! What a great way to start off my day! Thanks for sharing your cute little flash fiction piece that me back to being a boy, when I've actually seen that picture before. :-)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Hi, Ric, I?m delighted you like this shortie and that it took you back to your boyhood. Thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from papa55mike
He knew something was about to happen and wanted to make sure he knew what he was doing. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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He knew something was about to happen and wanted to make sure he knew what he was doing. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you, mike, for your great response to my shortie. Rod
Comment from Navada
Ha! I like Ryan's train of thought - he only wants to deal with the best. He's a discerning customer already at such a young age. Thanks for the share! :)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Ha! I like Ryan's train of thought - he only wants to deal with the best. He's a discerning customer already at such a young age. Thanks for the share! :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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I love your take on my story, Navada. Many thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
the image does look like an image from Norman Rockwell
humorous poem
the word count is accurate
there is a punch line; always remember to dress after the doctor leaves the room
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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the image does look like an image from Norman Rockwell
humorous poem
the word count is accurate
there is a punch line; always remember to dress after the doctor leaves the room
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Rosemary, for sharing my story.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Well-crafted, Mystery Writer!
And a fine question from an inquisitive young man!
I'd want to know the answer as well before I was jabbed in my behind!
Loved the humor in your 50-word story!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Well-crafted, Mystery Writer!
And a fine question from an inquisitive young man!
I'd want to know the answer as well before I was jabbed in my behind!
Loved the humor in your 50-word story!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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So pleased you enjoyed the humor in my shortie, Diane. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Mia Twysted
Kids will ask the craziest things, and it is always funny. I am left wondering how the doctor responded to the question he was posed. Maybe next time Ryan comes in he has a new certificate on the wall.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Kids will ask the craziest things, and it is always funny. I am left wondering how the doctor responded to the question he was posed. Maybe next time Ryan comes in he has a new certificate on the wall.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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I, too, wonder how the doctor responded, Mia. Many. Thanks for sharing my story.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Humorous image and a fun 50 word story to complement it. A nice piece of dialogue from Ryan in the vernacular which added to the charm of the post. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Humorous image and a fun 50 word story to complement it. A nice piece of dialogue from Ryan in the vernacular which added to the charm of the post. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for sharing and praising my story, Debbie. Glad you enjoyed the vernacular.
Comment from lyenochka
This is cute! And in today's highly specialized medical world, I am guessing there might be someone that has that specialty. I wonder if that's before or after the vaccination. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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This is cute! And in today's highly specialized medical world, I am guessing there might be someone that has that specialty. I wonder if that's before or after the vaccination. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you, lyenochka. I always appreciate your checking in. Glad you enjoyed my shortie.
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I love your Norman Rockwell stories!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent flash story for the contest.
Most kids have had a similar experience, but the butt specialist
line is creative addition.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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This is an excellent flash story for the contest.
Most kids have had a similar experience, but the butt specialist
line is creative addition.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Robert, for your high praise of my shortie. Glad you liked my last line.
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a great take on the old Norman Rockwell.
One catch:
Are you a butt specialist?" Ryan answered. This don't say."
( " before the word This)
Good luck in the competition!
D
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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This is a great take on the old Norman Rockwell.
One catch:
Are you a butt specialist?" Ryan answered. This don't say."
( " before the word This)
Good luck in the competition!
D
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your kind words about my story, Doug, and the heads-up about my error.
