Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, First Kiss, has the proper formatting and creates a scene where the opposing lip owners will mash together their whistle wings to express happiness.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Whistle wings? That's a new one for me. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I wish I had six stars to give you for this, but I am all out. You did a lovely job with the words you chose and the art work is beautiful and goes so well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Teri, thank you. What a lovely thing to say. I'm out of 6* as well. Not sure how many we get. I gave someone a 4* and was scolded severely by someone on here. I guess we have to use the 5* unconditionally? I'm relatively new on here so I'm still learning the ins and outs.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Sweet! A delightful 1-6-1 poem for the writing prompt. I enjoyed the message and the beauty of presentation. My husband worries about me too. It's good for them. (smile)

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024

Thank you, Janet, for your nice review and comments.
Blessings to you as well.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I liked your poem, but for the contest, all lines had to rhyme. I hope it won't be too much trouble to fix it. The poem was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024

Thank you for reading and the heads up. I need to start reading all the words.