Believing
Don't Stop!10 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I'm so glad this won. Beautifully written and illustrated in this most difficult form. Sending you my best today as always and congratulations on your blue ribbon.
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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I'm so glad this won. Beautifully written and illustrated in this most difficult form. Sending you my best today as always and congratulations on your blue ribbon.
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm always so glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from jim vecchio
It is so hard to write anything that makes sense with such few letters and syllables, but you have a unique entry here. Let's hope your words fly off the page, straight into the judges' arms!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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It is so hard to write anything that makes sense with such few letters and syllables, but you have a unique entry here. Let's hope your words fly off the page, straight into the judges' arms!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you, that's very nice of you. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
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I love reading your words!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
dreams are not easy to always experience
if you try it might be the last time you will try/nothing is given on a silver or gold platter
to dream the impossible dream/remember those lyrics
poem is written correctly
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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dreams are not easy to always experience
if you try it might be the last time you will try/nothing is given on a silver or gold platter
to dream the impossible dream/remember those lyrics
poem is written correctly
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much for this thoughtful review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Believing, has the proper formatting and suggests that dreams are all in your head until you put the kinetics to use and make them happen.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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This 1-6-1, Believing, has the proper formatting and suggests that dreams are all in your head until you put the kinetics to use and make them happen.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much for this great review. :)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Nicely done! I like this imaginative and cleverly constructed 1-6-1 verse perfectly complementing the eye-catching image.A strong contender! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Nicely done! I like this imaginative and cleverly constructed 1-6-1 verse perfectly complementing the eye-catching image.A strong contender! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you, l appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Jeano
Love the art work you chose representing your words very well. Must have been lofty dreams. I see faces in those clouds. Good luck with the contest. Looks like there were a lot of entries.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Love the art work you chose representing your words very well. Must have been lofty dreams. I see faces in those clouds. Good luck with the contest. Looks like there were a lot of entries.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you! There is a lot of compitition, but that makes it fun. :)
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You're welcome
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with four excellent rhymes and nice theme with
good advice. We must try in order to accomplish anything.
Excellent art work to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with four excellent rhymes and nice theme with
good advice. We must try in order to accomplish anything.
Excellent art work to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you for this insightful review, l appreciate it. :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You make a good point about the nature of dreams.
-They aren't a given; you work toward them.
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You make a good point about the nature of dreams.
-They aren't a given; you work toward them.
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for this great review. :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Michele Harber
I love the idea behind this, that there's no dream that can't be achieved if you try. It's a wonderful outlook on life.
Just one question: do you pronounce "aren't" as a one-syllable word? If not, your second line has seven syllables.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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I love the idea behind this, that there's no dream that can't be achieved if you try. It's a wonderful outlook on life.
Just one question: do you pronounce "aren't" as a one-syllable word? If not, your second line has seven syllables.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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I always thought it was one syllable, but if i'm wrong, the commitee will let me know. Thank you for this nice review. :)
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No problem. Regarding "aren't," I've always pronounced it as "are ent," but I suspect some people pronounce it "arnt."
Comment from zanya
Yes why not ? An enthusiastic and optimistic take on the poetry contest here in this 1-6-1 and a piece of advice easy to commit to memory - a great pic to illustrate.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Yes why not ? An enthusiastic and optimistic take on the poetry contest here in this 1-6-1 and a piece of advice easy to commit to memory - a great pic to illustrate.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)