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An Achoo Date

Jason sneezes at the restaurant.

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Comment from Douglas Goff
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Funny story. I can honestly say that has never happened to me. Thank goodness!

Question?:
When Jason, a wimpy, timid, adult and taller, goes on a date with Anna. They're eating in a restaurant.
(What is a taller? Typo?)

Good luck in the competition!
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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
    It's fixed. Thank you for your help, for the good luck, and kind review!
reply by Douglas Goff on 31-Jan-2024
    We?re all on the same team!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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First of all. I think Anna should be embarrassed that she asked a grown man such a thing. She should have just excused herself and climbed out of the bathroom window, as I would've done. lol

Excellent idea and very funny writing!

Better to begin like this
When Jason, (comma)...

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much! It's fixed.