Comment from
Douglas Goff
Funny story. I can honestly say that has never happened to me. Thank goodness!
Question?:
When Jason, a wimpy, timid, adult and taller, goes on a date with Anna. They're eating in a restaurant.
(What is a taller? Typo?)
Good luck in the competition!
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
It's fixed. Thank you for your help, for the good luck, and kind review!
reply by Douglas Goff on 31-Jan-2024
We?re all on the same team!
Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
First of all. I think Anna should be embarrassed that she asked a grown man such a thing. She should have just excused herself and climbed out of the bathroom window, as I would've done. lol
Excellent idea and very funny writing!
Better to begin like this
When Jason, (comma)...
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
Thank you so much! It's fixed.