My favourite sandwich
My first attempt at visual poetry2 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, My Favorite Sandwich, has the proper formatting and makes it clear that the bacon, lettuce, and tomato sandwich has definitely got a a big fan.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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This 1-6-1, My Favorite Sandwich, has the proper formatting and makes it clear that the bacon, lettuce, and tomato sandwich has definitely got a a big fan.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Bill.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the 1-6-1 contest
though I'm not sure about using the same rhyme word twice.
I agree about B.L.Ts
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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This is an excellent entry for the 1-6-1 contest
though I'm not sure about using the same rhyme word twice.
I agree about B.L.Ts
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thanks. It might be disqualified on that basis but the whole structure of the piece depends upon that repetition.