In Plane Sight
A Close Encounter7 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ah, young, oblivious love! Who doesn't miss those days when the world revolved around us, the object of our affection and making out. VERY cute 50-word entry. I bet this one's going to do very well in the polls. Good luck. xo
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Ah, young, oblivious love! Who doesn't miss those days when the world revolved around us, the object of our affection and making out. VERY cute 50-word entry. I bet this one's going to do very well in the polls. Good luck. xo
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Haha! very amusing and well done for managing to express that little story so well in your 50 word prompt. Like the way that they were so engaged and distracted they didn't even realise they were on a plane let alone how they'd survived:) Good luck! Debbie
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Haha! very amusing and well done for managing to express that little story so well in your 50 word prompt. Like the way that they were so engaged and distracted they didn't even realise they were on a plane let alone how they'd survived:) Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
Comment from Mia Twysted
As I was reading, I was like this is going to be sad, and then you pulled it out right there at the end. He was so thrilled to be making out with a girl he didn't care what was going on around him. Just like a teenager.
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As I was reading, I was like this is going to be sad, and then you pulled it out right there at the end. He was so thrilled to be making out with a girl he didn't care what was going on around him. Just like a teenager.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hmmm, I guess that's young love! He was only aware of the object of his love. It's a cute short, short, my friend. I'm glad you entered the contest, best of luck in it.
Take care,
Hugs,
Rhonda
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Hmmm, I guess that's young love! He was only aware of the object of his love. It's a cute short, short, my friend. I'm glad you entered the contest, best of luck in it.
Take care,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
Comment from pome lover
cute. Very good entry.
When I read it, I changed it a bit in my mind so you could end it with,
"What Plane?" or "Ummm, what?" But you have the same idea. Funny.
Also good picture.
Katharine
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cute. Very good entry.
When I read it, I changed it a bit in my mind so you could end it with,
"What Plane?" or "Ummm, what?" But you have the same idea. Funny.
Also good picture.
Katharine
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
Comment from RodG
Your story made me chuckle. Young lovers are oblivious to everything, especially setting. I surely hope the girl survived, too. Good luck in the contest. Rod
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Your story made me chuckle. Young lovers are oblivious to everything, especially setting. I surely hope the girl survived, too. Good luck in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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There isn't much to write in fifty words, so I thought I'd have some vicarious fun!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Flying through the air to safety sounds like a miracle and you made me smile with this odd story about surviving an air disaster, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Flying through the air to safety sounds like a miracle and you made me smile with this odd story about surviving an air disaster, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you! If it weren't for the word limit, I would've done a better story. I like these exercises because it teaches me what words are necessary, what aren't, and how to make some kind of sense out of it all.
