Two Baby Girls
Answer in author notes43 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This riddling poem, Two Baby Girls, provides the readers with a mini-mystery, which turns out to be both funny and delightful when thinking of a third precious baby. Neat.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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This riddling poem, Two Baby Girls, provides the readers with a mini-mystery, which turns out to be both funny and delightful when thinking of a third precious baby. Neat.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Awe, Bill, you are the greatest and I appreciate all your wonderful comments. Thank you so very much for always being so kind.
I pray for your wife too that she is doing better. God bless you both.
Love, Debi
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Debi
Congratulations on your win very clever riddle poem and deserved to win so well done
It is always fun to have a go and I am very pleased with a
3rd Place
Cheers Chris
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Hi Debi
Congratulations on your win very clever riddle poem and deserved to win so well done
It is always fun to have a go and I am very pleased with a
3rd Place
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
Comment from pome lover
well, I didn't guess that one, but it is so cute. I have decided (ahem) that the baby on the left has a sweet face, and will probably be a sweet, obedient child. The baby on the right looks like she's raring to go. I bet she will be a ball of fire.
Darling picture and good riddle. 'Course I didn't spend much
time trying to figure it out, well, because ... voila! there was the answer. :)
Katharine
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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well, I didn't guess that one, but it is so cute. I have decided (ahem) that the baby on the left has a sweet face, and will probably be a sweet, obedient child. The baby on the right looks like she's raring to go. I bet she will be a ball of fire.
Darling picture and good riddle. 'Course I didn't spend much
time trying to figure it out, well, because ... voila! there was the answer. :)
Katharine
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thanks so very much, Kay. I appreciate your very kind words for my poem and thanks for having some fun with me.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This riddle's pretty old and worn, so the creativity factor here is a little lacking. But the babies are cute, so there's kudos for that. Hope it does well for you in the contest, Mystery Writer. Also, grammatically, it should be neither of them WAS a twin because neither is a condensed form of "not either (one)," so it's singular and would use a singular verb (was) not a plural one (were)
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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This riddle's pretty old and worn, so the creativity factor here is a little lacking. But the babies are cute, so there's kudos for that. Hope it does well for you in the contest, Mystery Writer. Also, grammatically, it should be neither of them WAS a twin because neither is a condensed form of "not either (one)," so it's singular and would use a singular verb (was) not a plural one (were)
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Rachellle thank you for your always lovely reviews
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Thank you for understanding, Mystery Contestant. Some members don't like being corrected if their grammar is off, but I think on a writing site, where we're all trying to offer our best work, it's important to respectfully let other writers know where the spags are. To bestow fives without impunity is actually insulting. Plus, for this contest, so many of the entries were exceptionally creative and spag-free, and I was bestowing fives on those, so that's why I would have felt wrong doing likewise for yours.
Comment from jessizero
This riddle was clever! I must admit I didn't know the answer until I read it in the author's notes. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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This riddle was clever! I must admit I didn't know the answer until I read it in the author's notes. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Jessi, I thank you so very much for your lovely comments for my riddle poem and for having some fun with me too.
Comment from jenintorre
Ah this is so cute and the photo is adorable. I didn't guess the answer. What a great entry for the competition. I am sure it will do well. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Ah this is so cute and the photo is adorable. I didn't guess the answer. What a great entry for the competition. I am sure it will do well. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Jen, I thank you so very much for your lovely comments for my riddle poem and for having some fun with me too.
Comment from Sarita Méndez
I love it, and I love this picture! They are so cute, I love their smile.
This is a very nice little poem.
Thank you for sharing your text and good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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I love it, and I love this picture! They are so cute, I love their smile.
This is a very nice little poem.
Thank you for sharing your text and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Hello Sarita, this was so much fun. Most did not figure out that they were only two out of three, that were triplets. Thanks for playing this silly riddle game with me. I hope you had as much fun as I did. LOL...
Comment from Barry Penfold
Nice poem. Tricky riddle. Lovely image. Triplets. Now there is a handful. All the best in the contest. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Nice poem. Tricky riddle. Lovely image. Triplets. Now there is a handful. All the best in the contest. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Hi Barry, this was so much fun. Most did not figure out that they were only two out of three, that were triplets. Thanks for playing this silly riddle game with me. I hope you had as much fun as I did. LOL...
Comment from Begin Again
Now that's a thought provoking and wonderful riddle. Triplets! So clever and a great way to make the reader clear out some cobwebs and think. Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day! Carol
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Now that's a thought provoking and wonderful riddle. Triplets! So clever and a great way to make the reader clear out some cobwebs and think. Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day! Carol
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Hi Carol, LOL I am a tricky one, aren't I? Most did not figure out that they were only two out of three, that were triplets. Thanks for playing this silly riddle game with me. I hope you had as much fun as I did.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Well I don't know:) the third one:) "Yet neither of them were a twin
So tell me why and you will win!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Well I don't know:) the third one:) "Yet neither of them were a twin
So tell me why and you will win!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Hello Iza, I am a tricky one, aren't I? Most did not figure out that they were only two out of three, that were triplets. Thanks Sweetie, for playing this silly riddle game with me. I hope you had as much fun as I did. LOL...
