Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

This is a great start, for sure, Caroline! Two decades? My goodness, stop thinking and get writing. Lol.

I wish you much success with the contest.

best, JohnC

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024

That made me laugh! Yes you are probably right, but there are to many thoughts floating round in my brain - I don?t seem to be able to catch all of them!

And thank you. :-)

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A fascinating idea! I wonder if that innocent and beautiful creature could truly have such an impact or even indicate that something is about to happen. I think you should write that story before it's stolen from under you. Great entry here which made me think. Good luck, Caroline! Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024

Thanks Debbie for your kind review. I certainly haven?t got very far so far, but I?ll work on it! Haha!
Best wishes
Caroline