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Comment from Gunner Lil
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This reader loves this poem. It says so much about life with so few words.
An easy read that has a good flow and pace.
Good luck with contest. Thank you.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
    Thank you for your very kind and supportive review, and for the good wishes (it didn't place). Greatly appreciated.
    Wendy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Compassion and empathy for other people is a must. Practicing compassion is an essential element of being an effective servant leader. Understanding what your people need and having the desire to help them.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Rosemary. It is too easy to say "spiritual" words, but not put the compassion of Jesus into practice. Many thanks for reviewing.
    Wendy
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is an excellent entry into the faith prompt contest. Couldn't agree more that compassion is key.

Everything is spot on and I wish you great luck with the voters. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much Gloria. Too little compassion practised these days. I appreciate your kind words and good wishes.
Comment from Ricky1024
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This was well written as well as it was very rich within is bounds.
It also read and flowed perfectly and thank you very much for sharing as you shall have a wonderful and beautiful day!
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your very kind words of support. Appreciated.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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I agree, compassion is a key toward acting in ways that Jesus did. Too many people judge and demean others rather than show compassion toward them. In these few syllables you have said much. I enjoyed reviewing your presentation. Well done.

Best wishes;

Alex

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much Alex - you have understood perfectly, and your thoughtful review is very astute.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine faithful post for the contest and our daily actions reflect who we are and we never know who someone is until they act, fine words for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
    Thank you Dolly. Yes, it's very easy to appear "spiritual" - but is the faith actually active in showing compassion to others?
Comment from Amanda marchuk
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Title: A Faithful Reflection

In this short and sweet poem, the author beautifully captures the essence of faith intertwined with love. With a professional tone, the poem highlights the significance of aligning our actions with our beliefs and emphasizes the importance of compassion.

The opening line, "Express faith with love," immediately sets the tone, prompting readers to contemplate the connection between faith and love and how they can be expressed harmoniously. It suggests that merely professing faith is insufficient; it must be demonstrated through genuine acts of love.

The second line, "Your actions must reflect Him," serves as a gentle reminder of the responsibility that comes with faith. It compels readers to examine whether their actions align with the principles and teachings they hold dear. By reflecting Him, it implies the embodiment of the divine qualities and virtues associated with faith.

The poem concludes with the powerful statement, "Compassion is key." Through this concise line, the author emphasizes the essential role compassion plays in our spiritual journey. It underscores the significance of empathy, kindness, and understanding in our interactions with others.

Overall, this poem encapsulates a profound message in a concise form. Its professional tone adds an air of wisdom and authority, lending credibility to the ideas expressed. By encouraging individuals to express their faith through love and urging them to prioritize compassion, this poem provides a valuable reminder of the essence of faith and its impact on our lives.

Note: Since the request was for a short and sweet poem review, the generated response focuses on the analysis of the poem, condensing the language and providing a concise evaluation.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
    Thank you so bery much for your thoughtful and careful analysis of the poem - you have understood perfectly and I am appreciative of your detailed reflections. Thank you too for the six stars - I greatly value them, and they mean a lot.
Comment from royowen
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I agree, Jesus was repeatedly moved with compassion to pray for the afflicted, and never missed, What a saviour. So I'd have to say, compassion stirs the faith, that must be God, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
    Thank you. So easy to use spiritual words .... so hard to really follow Him and be His heart and hands in all we do.
reply by royowen on 27-Jan-2024
    That?s true
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I liked reading this. Actions are important to show our faith. Compassion in this world is everything. Our world needs more of this . Good job using those words.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
    Absolutely agree. It's easy enough to say words, but genuine compassion for others expresses our faith. Many thanks for reviewing.