Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Great! Lovely rhyming pattern and a last punch line that made me smile! Altogether a strong entry, attractively presented and a joy to read. Just one little error in the title description with an extra 'k.' Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2024

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

I have always liked the Lion King movie, so this touched my heart. The characters were certainly kind but also a little violent. When they tried to kill Simba's dad, it was sad. He was born to rule. Nala stuck by his side throughout the movie. Did she snore?

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2024

Comment from Yusita

Excellent

Haha this was great. Very creative and humorous. I loved the unique topic you chose to write about. I haven't been brave enough to try my hand at writing a Limerick. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2024

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

I liked this poem. Picture goes well with the words. It is funny. The lions are adorable i liked the part where you said: his love life was in a bungle. Very good job .

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Nailed it.
Good luck
This has promise
i don't know if it is the rhyme itself
or the loving picture of the king and his queen of the jungle bungling about like two deer during the rut????

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024