Comment from Saki the Artist

Excellent

This is a perfect limerick. Please tell me it won the contest.

My only small suggestion is that the word "But" kind of doesn't fit. You could maybe replace it with "Now,". The "but" really belongs on the next line, but then you run the risk of the reader not getting the beat right. Ugh. I guess I don't have a better solution than the one you found. So 5 stars to you!

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024

Thank you for the great review, Saki. I appreciate the generous stars and suggestion. No, this one actually came in 2nd this time around. Glad to see you jumped on as a fan too. I haven't been on here for a couple weeks now and see this was written 6 days ago. Sorry for the late reply. I have other things going on right now. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thanks again, friend.

Ron

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Naughty but fun! Loved your rhyming pattern and the whole limerick fits the brief of being a bit bawdy and comical. The image, of course, fits the verse perfectly. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024

Thank you for the fantastic review, Debbie. I actually took two different pictures and put them together to make this one. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I. Glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great weekend.

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Bwa-ha-ha! That is hysterical! I love the woman laughing in the photo, now that I know what she's getting!
It is also one of the few entries that has the limerick cadence to it. Good job. best of luck in the contest! Julie

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024

Thank you for the fantastic review, Julie. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I actually put these 2 pictures together for this result. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Warning??? for what? Telling the truth? There are sufficient oldies but goodies reading these writings that are as complicit in their lives as you describe herein. Well done. It was a fun read.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024

Thank you for the great review, Tom. Yeah, I'm sure if I would have left the warning off someone would have whined about it. Lol. I appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Now, this is funny, mystery poet. That's what limericks are all about. Wonderfully written and illustrated in this form. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest. Sally ;))

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024

Thank you for the great review, Sally. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.