Perfect Match
well almost perfect3 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Tummey
I love this - the reassurance of someone to calm fears, and the fire in the heart still. The stereotype is usually that love lasts but passion doesn't. Thank you for proving it wrong in your poem.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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I love this - the reassurance of someone to calm fears, and the fire in the heart still. The stereotype is usually that love lasts but passion doesn't. Thank you for proving it wrong in your poem.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you Sarah I am glad you like it.
Comment from jessizero
I can't think of a better word than "hot" to describe this. You used words like "melts" and "ignites" to great effect. It is also sweet that these feelings are present after a long time. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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I can't think of a better word than "hot" to describe this. You used words like "melts" and "ignites" to great effect. It is also sweet that these feelings are present after a long time. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for this lovely review
Comment from Allieas
I enjoyed this poem. I could feel the deep love and passion, though also felt the burning question of why "almost' perfect?
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed this poem. I could feel the deep love and passion, though also felt the burning question of why "almost' perfect?
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Alex
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Many thanks, Alex. I "ain't" the perfect wife