The Passion
5/7/5 Poem2 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed this poem. The picture withe ducks is so cute. Clever idea. When you follow God and not our own will. Things will go much more smoothly. Look at our country. Some have pulled around from God. Words go well with the picture
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed this poem. The picture withe ducks is so cute. Clever idea. When you follow God and not our own will. Things will go much more smoothly. Look at our country. Some have pulled around from God. Words go well with the picture
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review Brenda and for you time!-Bless
Comment from jessizero
Unless you are trying some type of wordplay I don't understand, you need to write "passion" instead of "pashion." It looks like a simple typo, but, as I said, I don't know. You did a great job with the subject and syllable count. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Unless you are trying some type of wordplay I don't understand, you need to write "passion" instead of "pashion." It looks like a simple typo, but, as I said, I don't know. You did a great job with the subject and syllable count. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much jessizero!! Typo yes . Thanks for your excellent review and for your time! Bless PS Your new picture is Great! 6 stars!