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Cabo San Lucas

Naani Poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from Jeano
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I love Mahi and I'm hope you reeled this one in. Great visual. This line especially, "dinners tugging on her line" made your poem pop. Good Luck.
Write on!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind review and for you time Jeno!!-Bless
Comment from Allieas
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You did a beautiful job with this poem. Your words have me eager to get out of this cold and go somewhere tropical - if only I could!

Thank you for sharing!

Alex

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind review Allieas - Bless
Comment from Baltimore Born
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This is a wonderful post. Your picture also compliments this poem well. Your four lines, and 25 syllable count meets the requirements for this contest. Your poem flows well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
    Thank you for your kind review and for your time BB - Bless