Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

One small advice, please use a bigger font you don't want me to zoom to 200. I like this part, I felt like I was in the presence of a statue that takes life piece by piece: "Uncle Chris' eyes flashed with recognition, and the corners of his lips curled upwards in a hauntingly shallow attempt at a welcoming smile. Jacob felt an indescribably heavy feeling in his chest that left him at a complete loss for words. Jacob never once thought the day would come when he would feel pity towards his larger-than-life uncle."

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024

Thank you for your advise and your kind words. It's heartening to hear what passage in particular left an impact. I hope you look forward to future installments, and have a great week!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written, and it kept my attention the whole way through as it was being read to me. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and also wish you a good weekend. Pat.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024

Thank you for your kind words. I hope you had a good weekend, Pat!