Altering fear
My fear was changed to beauty in an instant.5 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
You had me going, thinking this was going to turnout being a horror story or something close. And then, you turned it into a happen ending, which I'm a huge sucker for. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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You had me going, thinking this was going to turnout being a horror story or something close. And then, you turned it into a happen ending, which I'm a huge sucker for. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you, very nice to hear your comments.
Comment from Carol Clark2
I enjoyed your unusual interpretation of the first line for the contest. Interesting write, changing fear to an awe of an unusual visitor. Suggestions: 'only quick (tapping)', unless the bird was using Duck tape, LOL. "With a cast iron pan in hand(, I) proceeded...." I love seeing the woodpeckers that inhabit out city. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed your unusual interpretation of the first line for the contest. Interesting write, changing fear to an awe of an unusual visitor. Suggestions: 'only quick (tapping)', unless the bird was using Duck tape, LOL. "With a cast iron pan in hand(, I) proceeded...." I love seeing the woodpeckers that inhabit out city. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thanks Carol. I really appreciate your help.
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You're welcome, Teresa. Hope it helps you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am glad this bird was not flattened with that cast iron frying pan here! A fun mystery solved and I enjoyed your post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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I am glad this bird was not flattened with that cast iron frying pan here! A fun mystery solved and I enjoyed your post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thanks, your fun.
Comment from Thesis
Hi Teresa, I read your story and it contains all the elements necessary. The thing that took away from its presentation and made it more difficult to read was the formatting. It was one paragraph that did not have any breaks for different parts of the story. I felt like I was reading one long run-on sentence. I think it would be much easier to read if you edited it. I would reconsider my rating if you do. - Thesis
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Hi Teresa, I read your story and it contains all the elements necessary. The thing that took away from its presentation and made it more difficult to read was the formatting. It was one paragraph that did not have any breaks for different parts of the story. I felt like I was reading one long run-on sentence. I think it would be much easier to read if you edited it. I would reconsider my rating if you do. - Thesis
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thanks Thesis. I'm not good with any of that, (English, righting skills) so I appreciate your help very much. Thanks again i'll try.
Comment from Sabrina H.
What a heart pounding story turned cute. My teenage daught feeds the birds at our house. When the food isn't there they buzz our heads to let us know they need more.
Cute story, I didn't see any error. Best of luck on the contest.
Keep writing:)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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What a heart pounding story turned cute. My teenage daught feeds the birds at our house. When the food isn't there they buzz our heads to let us know they need more.
Cute story, I didn't see any error. Best of luck on the contest.
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you much.
