Teenagers
They know more now then they will ever know5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-lined poem, Teenagers, has the required two lines and reminds us what we all have come to understand as fact: We were smarter when we were not responsible for anything.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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This two-lined poem, Teenagers, has the required two lines and reminds us what we all have come to understand as fact: We were smarter when we were not responsible for anything.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thanks Bill
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is SO very perceptive and spot-on (and hilarious.)
My oldest sister is 14 years older than me, and once, when I was eighteen, she said something "stupid" that made me roll my eyes. She gave me an omniscient little look, smirked and said, "That's alright. When I was your age, I had all the answers, too." Then she shrugged and said, "Now I don't even know what the question was." HAHAHAHAHA. (Of course, that caused an even bigger eye roll on my part.)
So, your delightful poem evoked that amusing vignette from my memory trove. Thank you for that, and good luck with this in the polls. xo
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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This is SO very perceptive and spot-on (and hilarious.)
My oldest sister is 14 years older than me, and once, when I was eighteen, she said something "stupid" that made me roll my eyes. She gave me an omniscient little look, smirked and said, "That's alright. When I was your age, I had all the answers, too." Then she shrugged and said, "Now I don't even know what the question was." HAHAHAHAHA. (Of course, that caused an even bigger eye roll on my part.)
So, your delightful poem evoked that amusing vignette from my memory trove. Thank you for that, and good luck with this in the polls. xo
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much Rachelle. So glad you like it.
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xoxox
Comment from Beth Lawson
Well, this is short and absolutely to the point! I raised two teenagers and I can attest that at that age, they know more (or think they do) than a Rhodes scholar. It's a cute, and short but sweet poem, and I wouldn't change a thing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Well, this is short and absolutely to the point! I raised two teenagers and I can attest that at that age, they know more (or think they do) than a Rhodes scholar. It's a cute, and short but sweet poem, and I wouldn't change a thing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from mermaids
You have created a two line poem that brings a smile to the reader's face. In some ways, teenagers do know quite a bit. I imagine they think they know everything. Excellent two line poem with a unique theme that I am sure many can relate to.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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You have created a two line poem that brings a smile to the reader's face. In some ways, teenagers do know quite a bit. I imagine they think they know everything. Excellent two line poem with a unique theme that I am sure many can relate to.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not sue I totally agree here but I think this is a fun post for the contest and I wish you luck, a fine picture and it sounds like you may have some teenage Grandchildren with some strong opinions, ha ha ha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Not sue I totally agree here but I think this is a fun post for the contest and I wish you luck, a fine picture and it sounds like you may have some teenage Grandchildren with some strong opinions, ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thanks Dolly.x
