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Winter Fashion Show

A 2-line poem

8 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Your poem is wonderfully written. The image is gorgeous, but I can't wait until these snow days are gone. I like the rhyming of your words and wish you good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
    I am so pleased you think my poem is "wonderfully written," Rosemary. That praise will keep me motivated for the rest of January. Thank you!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Clever personification of a common commodity in our life. Suddenly, we're surrounded with fashion models, if we simply go to the creative side of life! I love it.

You found the perfect picture for it, too. I hope this does great in the contest! xo

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
    I am delighted you think my personification of the trees is clever and my choice of artwork perfect. Many thanks for your best wishes, too, Rachelle.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 21-Jan-2024
    My pleasure!
Comment from Wendy G
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Excellent comparison to the world of modelling, as they stand there, beautifully dressed and elegant, and they have that self-belief in fulfilling their role. Lovely poem. Best wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
    Wendy, thank you so much for this wonderful review of y two-liner.
Comment from Julie Helms
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I think this is a very creative way of describing snow-laden trees. Your word choice (crowned, gowned, self-possessed) give it an air of propriety and formality. The Winter Ball, perhaps? Nicely done!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    What a terrific review of my poem, Julie. Thank you so much for all that praise.
Comment from royowen
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I love you have almost humanised this great two liner with the theme being the most inspirational season winter, but only really when nature turns to purest white, well done blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Roy, for sharing and praising my two-liner.
reply by royowen on 20-Jan-2024
    Most welcome
Comment from Navada
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I enjoyed your use of imagery and rhyme here to create a vivid scene in the readers' mind and understand the visual and tactile impact of the snow upon the evergreen branches. Thanks for the share! :)

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    I am so pleased you enjoyed my imagery and rhyme in this two-liner, Navada. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Sabrina H.
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What an interesting two line poem. You managed to say so much in few words. Beautifully written, I really enjoyed reading it. Best of luck on the contest.
Keep writing:)

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    I am thrilled you found my two-liner interesting and beautifully written, Sabrina. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Oh very neatly done! I enjoyed the imagery of the models parading their crowns and gowns (some great rhyming in your 2 line entry). Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie. So pleased you enjoyed the imagery and the rhymes.