Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Clues"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
3 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
OMG that was a fantastic chapter wow there's no way I can figure out who did it I mean any one of them could have holy smokes you got some serious creep factor going on there I am suffering from the eeebeejeebees! Exceptionally well done from a wordsmith extraordinaire I see no issues with grammar sentence structure punctuation or subject matter it is quite a thriller horror mystery suspense all wrapped in one excellent work and a fine submission!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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OMG that was a fantastic chapter wow there's no way I can figure out who did it I mean any one of them could have holy smokes you got some serious creep factor going on there I am suffering from the eeebeejeebees! Exceptionally well done from a wordsmith extraordinaire I see no issues with grammar sentence structure punctuation or subject matter it is quite a thriller horror mystery suspense all wrapped in one excellent work and a fine submission!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much your comments are greatly aprecated.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written, chapter for your book, and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I wish you the best with your book as well. I wish for you that you would have a happy day and a good week.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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This is a very well written, chapter for your book, and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I wish you the best with your book as well. I wish for you that you would have a happy day and a good week.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your comments and support. It's is really appreciated
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nicely written and the right amount the information and suspense. And now there might be a suspect after all. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Nicely written and the right amount the information and suspense. And now there might be a suspect after all. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Thank you. Your review adds to my desire to write more
