Glint
12 word poem8 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Shouldn't it be January's ? Just asking. You have a very lovely picture there. And the lack of color in your matting shows us the bleakness we can feel surrounded by cold. Good work. Nice poetry. Karen
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Shouldn't it be January's ? Just asking. You have a very lovely picture there. And the lack of color in your matting shows us the bleakness we can feel surrounded by cold. Good work. Nice poetry. Karen
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
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Have a good week. Karen
Comment from Wendy G
The image is very serene with this vision of stillness and pale sunshine, which is seen as a sign of hope and change. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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The image is very serene with this vision of stillness and pale sunshine, which is seen as a sign of hope and change. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Winter has been frigid here and it looks like the image, no sunshine to speak of just downright wintry weather. Everyone is looking forward to spring and the start of the countdown.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Winter has been frigid here and it looks like the image, no sunshine to speak of just downright wintry weather. Everyone is looking forward to spring and the start of the countdown.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Yes - roll on Spring! Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice juxtaposition of contrasting colors and moods pallid sunlight versus wintry doldrum. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Nice juxtaposition of contrasting colors and moods pallid sunlight versus wintry doldrum. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Douglas Goff
Excellent title for this one. Sometimes people just vanilla the perfect title and you hit it here. Picture is good too.
This should be a contender. Your words are well- placed and work well together. Most enjoyable!
D
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Excellent title for this one. Sometimes people just vanilla the perfect title and you hit it here. Picture is good too.
This should be a contender. Your words are well- placed and work well together. Most enjoyable!
D
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a hopeful write in twelve words about the glint of sunshine chasing off the winter blues. It would need more than a glint for me ð???
Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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This is a hopeful write in twelve words about the glint of sunshine chasing off the winter blues. It would need more than a glint for me ð???
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Yes b-r-r it's chilly -thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Yusita
Very well done here! I love the imagery and the archaic words you used... you've written something beautiful, and painted something beautiful in our minds as well.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Very well done here! I love the imagery and the archaic words you used... you've written something beautiful, and painted something beautiful in our minds as well.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Extremely atmospheric and mesmerising! How I can relate to that pallid sun this time of the year that seems to lack any depth whatsoever of much needed warmth, albeit it still beckons and even bestirs! Love that word 'doldrums' which sums up so much of our wintry lethargy and desire to join other creatures in their glorious hibernation! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Extremely atmospheric and mesmerising! How I can relate to that pallid sun this time of the year that seems to lack any depth whatsoever of much needed warmth, albeit it still beckons and even bestirs! Love that word 'doldrums' which sums up so much of our wintry lethargy and desire to join other creatures in their glorious hibernation! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Great review zanya
