Upset Tummy?
What a mess!6 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The image displays lots of liquid on the floor. It is embarrassing when you have this happen; people blame it on the flu but the beer was too plentiful at the time of eruption.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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The image displays lots of liquid on the floor. It is embarrassing when you have this happen; people blame it on the flu but the beer was too plentiful at the time of eruption.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Hahaha....thank you for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Navada
Oh dear! At least this loved one should be able to get to the bathroom or vomit in a nearby bag. That said, I once projectile vomited the entire length of our kitchen and then had to clean it up. Not fun. :)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Oh dear! At least this loved one should be able to get to the bathroom or vomit in a nearby bag. That said, I once projectile vomited the entire length of our kitchen and then had to clean it up. Not fun. :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much. :)
Comment from kiwisteveh
I've seen a number of entries for this contest while reviewing tonight.
Like the others, yours meets the criteria of haiku format and gross topic and so joins a cluster of contenders to be the King or Queen of Gross.
Your vomiting joins nose-picking (twice!), farting, full diapers and offensive littering in this quest.
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I've seen a number of entries for this contest while reviewing tonight.
Like the others, yours meets the criteria of haiku format and gross topic and so joins a cluster of contenders to be the King or Queen of Gross.
Your vomiting joins nose-picking (twice!), farting, full diapers and offensive littering in this quest.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you for reading my poem and for enduring the image with my words. It's very appreciated.
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations: You almost made ME vomit with this poem and its accompaning picture. Your syllable count was correct, too. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Congratulations: You almost made ME vomit with this poem and its accompaning picture. Your syllable count was correct, too. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much for this terrific review.
Comment from QC Poet
A funny format compliant 5-7-5 syllable Lowku wishing you the very best of Luck in the contest and good luck on any future poem challenges in the future
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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A funny format compliant 5-7-5 syllable Lowku wishing you the very best of Luck in the contest and good luck on any future poem challenges in the future
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Julie Helms
Ewww! Very effective! I just love the green surround color to emphasize the pukey-ness of it! Nice choice of graphic too.
Best of luck in the contest! Julie.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Ewww! Very effective! I just love the green surround color to emphasize the pukey-ness of it! Nice choice of graphic too.
Best of luck in the contest! Julie.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you, i appreciate this great review. :)