My poems (20 syllables)
Say it as it is24 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Just like my short stories. No padding, no fluffing them out. Nice pithy poem. I haven't seen you before. I will look for you now. Have a good week. Karen
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Just like my short stories. No padding, no fluffing them out. Nice pithy poem. I haven't seen you before. I will look for you now. Have a good week. Karen
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much Karen.
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U R Welcome :-)
Comment from karenina
LOL... No filler, no push up, no injections, no poetic prosthetics...
What we see is au natural!
Not sure why this makes me giggle, but it feels adorable!
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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LOL... No filler, no push up, no injections, no poetic prosthetics...
What we see is au natural!
Not sure why this makes me giggle, but it feels adorable!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. Jen
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Kaiku
Might you become a stalwart at 5-7-5 or 3-5-3? Good solid stories in such short order challenges one's creative grasp on Webster's library of adjectives.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Might you become a stalwart at 5-7-5 or 3-5-3? Good solid stories in such short order challenges one's creative grasp on Webster's library of adjectives.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much. Jen
Comment from NanaGaye
Short and sweet . I also like short to the point poems. syllable count perfect, well set out and delightful picture. Like to know more about you, where you live apart from writing your hobbies etc. All the best to you and good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Short and sweet . I also like short to the point poems. syllable count perfect, well set out and delightful picture. Like to know more about you, where you live apart from writing your hobbies etc. All the best to you and good luck with the contest
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much for the great review and stars. I just re-read your poem Dancer which I did review. I am a very frustrated dancer. I had the correct body, talent etc. but not the opportunity. I was born in 1942 so maybe in the next life. Take care Jen. X
Comment from Daylily
I appreciate reading postings that come straight to the point. It is refreshing after reading a few others that would benefit from undergoing a lot of serious editing. While I write a lot of short poems, I do mix it up a bit and post some that run short-story length. That is one of the great things about FS, there is plenty of variety to choose from. Best wishes with your excellent entry!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I appreciate reading postings that come straight to the point. It is refreshing after reading a few others that would benefit from undergoing a lot of serious editing. While I write a lot of short poems, I do mix it up a bit and post some that run short-story length. That is one of the great things about FS, there is plenty of variety to choose from. Best wishes with your excellent entry!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much for the great review. Jen.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love these few clever words Jen and your thoughts were expressed here without any padding whatsoever! A fun post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I love these few clever words Jen and your thoughts were expressed here without any padding whatsoever! A fun post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thanks Dolly. So glad you like it. X
Comment from godlucifer
creative in so few words. this was a talent write and the structure of the poem was creativity. your poem was great to read. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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creative in so few words. this was a talent write and the structure of the poem was creativity. your poem was great to read. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. Jen.
Comment from Julie Helms
You have accomplished what you set out to do. It's really neat that your topic is reflected in the physical simplicity of the poem and straightforwardness of the words, even the plainness of the font.
Nicely done! Julie
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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You have accomplished what you set out to do. It's really neat that your topic is reflected in the physical simplicity of the poem and straightforwardness of the words, even the plainness of the font.
Nicely done! Julie
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much Julie
Comment from Navada
I think that's a fair comment for a shortened syllable response! I think there's a time and a place for brevity and another one for being expansive and exploring ideas in depth.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I think that's a fair comment for a shortened syllable response! I think there's a time and a place for brevity and another one for being expansive and exploring ideas in depth.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Yes. Too right. Thanks. Jen.
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning,
I think this is a perfect 20 syllable poem...with the use of perfect rhymes.
Sometime short and sweet is all that is needed in a great poem.
Lisasview
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Good morning,
I think this is a perfect 20 syllable poem...with the use of perfect rhymes.
Sometime short and sweet is all that is needed in a great poem.
Lisasview
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. Jen. X
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Hi Jen,
You are so welcome!
Lisa
