Pearl
Poem 5/7/55 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is my favorite of all the entries, no close seconds. It like that, in so few syllables, you conveyed a mountain of feeling and reality. SO extremely well done. xo
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is my favorite of all the entries, no close seconds. It like that, in so few syllables, you conveyed a mountain of feeling and reality. SO extremely well done. xo
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Superb review zanya
Comment from Aiona
This is a cute 5-7-5 poem that uses pearls as a metaphor for faith. That over time it becomes more valuable and beautiful. Um.... Yes. I see the parallel. :) It's a very nice analogy.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is a cute 5-7-5 poem that uses pearls as a metaphor for faith. That over time it becomes more valuable and beautiful. Um.... Yes. I see the parallel. :) It's a very nice analogy.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
Comment from Mustang Patty
Such delightful words to describe the essence of faith. Yes, it is like a pearl, and I love the simplicity of your poem. Good luck in the contest, and thank you for sharing.
~MP~
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Such delightful words to describe the essence of faith. Yes, it is like a pearl, and I love the simplicity of your poem. Good luck in the contest, and thank you for sharing.
~MP~
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thanks for this superb review zanya
Comment from Julie Helms
That is a really lovely metaphor for the long and grueling process of maturing faith. It is human nature to ask God for the final product, without going through the time and rigors involved in getting there. Very well done, I really liked it! Julie.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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That is a really lovely metaphor for the long and grueling process of maturing faith. It is human nature to ask God for the final product, without going through the time and rigors involved in getting there. Very well done, I really liked it! Julie.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Superb review and thanks again for those 6 twinkling stars zanya
Comment from kiwisteveh
Fine entry for this contest. Your brief 5-7-5 uses an excellent simile to make a coherent statement about your faith - something that takes time and patience to reach 'opalescence.'
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Fine entry for this contest. Your brief 5-7-5 uses an excellent simile to make a coherent statement about your faith - something that takes time and patience to reach 'opalescence.'
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Superb review zanya
