2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Mercy and Bread".
8 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal
This is a good set of haikus that tell us of a search for God and faith. It reminds us the He can be found anywhere and in anyone.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest
Have a wondrous weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Hi MariVal
This is a good set of haikus that tell us of a search for God and faith. It reminds us the He can be found anywhere and in anyone.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest
Have a wondrous weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal
This is a good set of haikus that tell us of a search for God and faith. It reminds us the He can be found anywhere and in anyone.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest
Have a wondrous weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Hi MariVal
This is a good set of haikus that tell us of a search for God and faith. It reminds us the He can be found anywhere and in anyone.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest
Have a wondrous weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
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You?re welcome on both accounts, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I think we can find God everywhere. We just need to look with an open heart. This is a beautiful poem and a beautiful presentation. It causes the reader to ponder where can they find God.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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I think we can find God everywhere. We just need to look with an open heart. This is a beautiful poem and a beautiful presentation. It causes the reader to ponder where can they find God.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your time reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sugarray77
You did a fantastic job with this one... it reminded me of a lonely and searching wind that flows over the land looking.. just looking. Thanks for explaining the cypress trees... I had heard that when we lived in Italy. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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You did a fantastic job with this one... it reminded me of a lonely and searching wind that flows over the land looking.. just looking. Thanks for explaining the cypress trees... I had heard that when we lived in Italy. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Melissa. I appreciate your time reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was breathtaking in its purity. The way we view things that bring us comfort after a loss, both physical and spiritual. This was very comforting. Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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This was breathtaking in its purity. The way we view things that bring us comfort after a loss, both physical and spiritual. This was very comforting. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I wish you the best, Gretchen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, this is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about the mercy and bread. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Gypsy, this is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about the mercy and bread. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I wish you the best, Teri.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
cool! did not know that. i like that image of a tree pointing the way to heaven...
great imagistic poem with nice word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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cool! did not know that. i like that image of a tree pointing the way to heaven...
great imagistic poem with nice word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Shelley. I appreciate your review and insightful feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely prayer of longing for the Lord. The only part that's not needed is to "win your love" as God already loves us and there's nothing we need to do to earn and win His love.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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A lovely prayer of longing for the Lord. The only part that's not needed is to "win your love" as God already loves us and there's nothing we need to do to earn and win His love.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Big Sister. I'll change that. I based it on the Book of Longings. Anna loves Jesus since the moment she met him and had some reservations about Jesus loving her, just for a moment, but of course, he loved her from the moment he met her too. I guess it's hard to understand if you haven't read the book. All through the book, Jesus is portrayed as the real Jesus and how he loved everybody. I appreciate your review and insightful feedback.
love,
marival
