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Comment from dragonpoet
HI John,
This is an interesting concept. It is true, too. Youth is the paradise lost.
And aging can be hell to some. Both can be called places is life.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Have a great rest of the weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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HI John,
This is an interesting concept. It is true, too. Youth is the paradise lost.
And aging can be hell to some. Both can be called places is life.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Have a great rest of the weekend
Joan
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Thank you, Joan. Yes you get it. :)
John
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You?re welcome, John
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Time does often cause of problems. Memories of time past can linger on longer than they should. Time in the present can zoom by. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Time does often cause of problems. Memories of time past can linger on longer than they should. Time in the present can zoom by. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I enjoyed reading your review.
John
Comment from Lea Tonin1
That's a really good poem! I really like this one and you know the fine example for the 5 7 5 contest!
There's such a cool poem there's only one thing that can be done about it I think it's a real contender she's got a great picture great text choice and background sets it off very well so I can find nothing wrong with the perfection of this poem I hope you have a great day I hope you are well!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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That's a really good poem! I really like this one and you know the fine example for the 5 7 5 contest!
There's such a cool poem there's only one thing that can be done about it I think it's a real contender she's got a great picture great text choice and background sets it off very well so I can find nothing wrong with the perfection of this poem I hope you have a great day I hope you are well!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Lea, your generous words humble me. I have been most lapse in responding to my reviews and I am finally almost caught up. I have saved yours for the last because they are such a joy to read. I feel like a glutton over indulging in delicious uplifting prose.
John
Comment from poetwatch
How we wish to spend some time in one of those places, Lordinajamjar. :) In either place, time will be there like a captain on a ship. I want to go to paradise. I've lived in hell to long. :) This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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How we wish to spend some time in one of those places, Lordinajamjar. :) In either place, time will be there like a captain on a ship. I want to go to paradise. I've lived in hell to long. :) This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you Poet, for your encouraging words. I do hope joy is in your cards for the future. :)
John
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and I wish you the very best in the contest may you have a blessed day. May your year also be blessed as you move ahead in 2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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This is very well written, and I wish you the very best in the contest may you have a blessed day. May your year also be blessed as you move ahead in 2024
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you Pat, for the uplifting review.
Best
John
