2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Seven Seas".
7 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Great descriptions in this poem. The words you chose for the poem are wonderfully descriptive. I loved it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Gorgeous presentation.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Great descriptions in this poem. The words you chose for the poem are wonderfully descriptive. I loved it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Gorgeous presentation.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Barbara. I appreciate your review and insightful feedback.
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Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed all the active and dramatic imagery from the dancing and heart beat like horses galloping and the connection across the seven seas. The narrator truly lives her out her love in her yearnings and dreams.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Enjoyed all the active and dramatic imagery from the dancing and heart beat like horses galloping and the connection across the seven seas. The narrator truly lives her out her love in her yearnings and dreams.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The image looks like a palm reader. But I think she's just another beauty who dances with the breeze and feels the movement of the boat going downstream. Then she sees galloping horses in the midst.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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The image looks like a palm reader. But I think she's just another beauty who dances with the breeze and feels the movement of the boat going downstream. Then she sees galloping horses in the midst.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from royowen
What a lovely arrangement of short form verses leading to a very well written wholeheartedly stylish free verse that is very well done, indeed Gypsy, an excellent post dear girl, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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What a lovely arrangement of short form verses leading to a very well written wholeheartedly stylish free verse that is very well done, indeed Gypsy, an excellent post dear girl, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Most welcome
Comment from shelley kaye
over diamonds-covered ocean <-- for some reason i tripped over this line. i'm not sure if the s on diamond should be there. maybe diamond-covered oceans? it could be just me but just thought i'd mention it.
other than that, a great tercet free verse with great imagery!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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over diamonds-covered ocean <-- for some reason i tripped over this line. i'm not sure if the s on diamond should be there. maybe diamond-covered oceans? it could be just me but just thought i'd mention it.
other than that, a great tercet free verse with great imagery!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Shelley.
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Comment from Douglas Goff
Another beautifully splendid piece written in your unique flowing style.
The woman in the top photo looked a little stern. Or dangerous. Maybe dangerously stern. Ha!
Fun read.
Douglas
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Another beautifully splendid piece written in your unique flowing style.
The woman in the top photo looked a little stern. Or dangerous. Maybe dangerously stern. Ha!
Fun read.
Douglas
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Hehe... she is a fancy gypsy... maybe a little dominatrix lol
Thank you, Douglas.
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Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Gypsy. This verse is so eloquent and exquisite. The flow of thought and beauty is wonderful to read and appreciate. I would mention that I think the word 'diamonds' should be singular. Just a thought .. this is a great write, my friend.
Melissa
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Hello Gypsy. This verse is so eloquent and exquisite. The flow of thought and beauty is wonderful to read and appreciate. I would mention that I think the word 'diamonds' should be singular. Just a thought .. this is a great write, my friend.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Melissa.
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