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Moonlit Dawn

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Beyond the Village"
Humanity's next chapter after the fall of Earth

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Gorod Volkov - City of the Wolves:) nice one, and the dangers are lurking at every corner, let see what will happen next. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    Thank you for your kinds words! I'm so glad you noticed the city name; keep an eye out moving forward, because most of the city names are Russian-based (the chorans, too!) due to the circumstances of humanity's... relocation. I hope you look forward to future installments!
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well written story, and it was a joy to listen to. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish you the best and happiest new year. May God bless you richly. Patricia.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
    Thank you for your kind words! I hope you look forward to future installments, and that the new year is treating you well!