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Jesus is always in demand!
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Comment from
Brenda Strauser
How true this is. We need to guide us though each day. Trust in God will your heart. I really liked your it flowed well. Good descriptive words. Great job
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
Thank you, Brenda! I really appreciate the feedback👍 I put God in almost every poem I write👍✝️👍
Comment from
Navada
There is a jovial and relaxed tone to this piece. Just watch for a few little spag issues such as the repetition of "your" in the fourth line. Good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
Thanks Navada,for the feedback and advice👍
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