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Jesus Is In Demand

Jesus is always in demand!

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Comment from Brenda Strauser
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How true this is. We need to guide us though each day. Trust in God will your heart. I really liked your it flowed well. Good descriptive words. Great job

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Brenda! I really appreciate the feedback👍 I put God in almost every poem I write👍✝️👍
Comment from Navada
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There is a jovial and relaxed tone to this piece. Just watch for a few little spag issues such as the repetition of "your" in the fourth line. Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
    Thanks Navada,for the feedback and advice👍