Stone Heart
Young parents tend to make mistakes...7 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Tummey
This has a very powerful message. I know I've been influenced by all sorts of people, not just my parents.
As humans, we all tend to fall short of where we'd ideally like to be. I think any parent can only do their best and hope their children have others who can step up at times when they're unable to.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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This has a very powerful message. I know I've been influenced by all sorts of people, not just my parents.
As humans, we all tend to fall short of where we'd ideally like to be. I think any parent can only do their best and hope their children have others who can step up at times when they're unable to.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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I appreciate your review, thank you!!
It?s hard because my oldest isn?t doing his part and it?s hard to watch!!
The hardest thing I think that goes with what you?ve said is that we all have a choice. Unfortunately, I see a lot of really young parents falling short.
Not all because obviously that is never the case :)
Comment from Navada
There is some beautiful and challenging imagery deployed here. The good news is that stone hearts can be melted and returned to human flesh once more.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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There is some beautiful and challenging imagery deployed here. The good news is that stone hearts can be melted and returned to human flesh once more.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much!! I appreciate you!!
Comment from Wendy G
A very honest and meaningful Trinet. I think you have done the best you could, by giving them resilience and hope and courage to overcome when confronted with the reality of the unintentional weakness or failings of others. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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A very honest and meaningful Trinet. I think you have done the best you could, by giving them resilience and hope and courage to overcome when confronted with the reality of the unintentional weakness or failings of others. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, the path of a parent is paved with good intentions, no human being is perfect, but if one loves a child, they will raise them in the of integrity, giving that child luevin the prcess, well done, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Oh yes, the path of a parent is paved with good intentions, no human being is perfect, but if one loves a child, they will raise them in the of integrity, giving that child luevin the prcess, well done, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thank you!! I appreciate you!!
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Welcome
Comment from Sabrina H.
Very beautiful and touching poem. Childern are fragile but seem to overcome a lot when they know, no matter what, that we love them. I also love the pitcure you used.
Best wishes:)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Very beautiful and touching poem. Childern are fragile but seem to overcome a lot when they know, no matter what, that we love them. I also love the pitcure you used.
Best wishes:)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I don't know this verse form but have taken a quick look at the specifications. I think it's a very brave thing to do to convey your remorse in this way. The most important message from it is that self knowledge is power and that, as you say, taking responsibility can help you rise again. We can't know, sometimes what the future holds when we have children. But whilst we know that, on the one hand, they are 'malleable' we also recognise that they can be resilient because it's part of the process of growing up. Your succinct and well crafted verse in this form is a very worthy contender for the contest. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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I don't know this verse form but have taken a quick look at the specifications. I think it's a very brave thing to do to convey your remorse in this way. The most important message from it is that self knowledge is power and that, as you say, taking responsibility can help you rise again. We can't know, sometimes what the future holds when we have children. But whilst we know that, on the one hand, they are 'malleable' we also recognise that they can be resilient because it's part of the process of growing up. Your succinct and well crafted verse in this form is a very worthy contender for the contest. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much!! I appreciate you, ma?am!!
Comment from Yusita
Wow. This was a very moving and profound piece that speaks the bare truth. It's so true, parents, especially young and immature ones, are many times unaware of how their actions forever impact their children's young and tender hearts. The last lines powerfully summarize the results.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Wow. This was a very moving and profound piece that speaks the bare truth. It's so true, parents, especially young and immature ones, are many times unaware of how their actions forever impact their children's young and tender hearts. The last lines powerfully summarize the results.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you!
