Behind The Fall
A free verse poem32 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Jessica,
Congrats on your first place win in the Free Verse Poem contest. You've penned a masterful poem about the wonder and majesty of a waterfall. Your words alone give life to the imagery imagined between the words as they comprehensively describe the mystery behind the fall.
You are one of my favorite writers/poets and reviewers here on Fanstory. Your posts are always captivating and full of intrigue. This is one of your bests deserving of nothing less than 10 stars.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Jessica,
Congrats on your first place win in the Free Verse Poem contest. You've penned a masterful poem about the wonder and majesty of a waterfall. Your words alone give life to the imagery imagined between the words as they comprehensively describe the mystery behind the fall.
You are one of my favorite writers/poets and reviewers here on Fanstory. Your posts are always captivating and full of intrigue. This is one of your bests deserving of nothing less than 10 stars.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Eugene, trying to find the right words to convey the depth of my gratitude for your compassionate words is an impossible task. I was tied up and off the site for a few days, and upon returning, reading your words of encouragement has truly lifted my spirits. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
Xo
Jess
Comment from Ric Myworld
Had I not read your flash story, I never would have even seen your poem. And although I read little poetry, and even less free verse, I'm glad to have read this one. Congrats on your win! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Had I not read your flash story, I never would have even seen your poem. And although I read little poetry, and even less free verse, I'm glad to have read this one. Congrats on your win! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Ric. That truly means so much to me!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I haven't been active on Fanstory for a few weeks, so missed seeing this. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Your free verse is filled with mystical imagery and feeling.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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I haven't been active on Fanstory for a few weeks, so missed seeing this. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Your free verse is filled with mystical imagery and feeling.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Ginda! That means a lot! Xo
Comment from Teri7
Jessica, Congratulations on your win for this very lovely and beautifully written free verse poem. You used great descriptive words and amazing imagery from the artwork you chose. I love to look at waterfalls. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Jessica, Congratulations on your win for this very lovely and beautifully written free verse poem. You used great descriptive words and amazing imagery from the artwork you chose. I love to look at waterfalls. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Teri, thank you so much! I truly appreciate it. Xo
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much! Truly honored!
Comment from Janis M.
Your poem reads and looks like a waterfall! Even the stanzas have this separation to them like moving water. It is beautiful. I have never been one to marvel at waterfalls and I don't know why, but your words on paper (screen?) describe the exact experience I wish I could see and feel when looking at them. Perhaps next time I will!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Your poem reads and looks like a waterfall! Even the stanzas have this separation to them like moving water. It is beautiful. I have never been one to marvel at waterfalls and I don't know why, but your words on paper (screen?) describe the exact experience I wish I could see and feel when looking at them. Perhaps next time I will!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Janis! Xo
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Love the poem. It really is beautiful watching water falls. The little drops unafraid and unaffected by the rough road it travel on, teaches to surrender.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Love the poem. It really is beautiful watching water falls. The little drops unafraid and unaffected by the rough road it travel on, teaches to surrender.
Good luck.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Maria! Xo
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I like this poem about waterfalls. where was the picture taken? which waterfall did you write about or was it more a generi water fall poem? would also made a good Ode poem
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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I like this poem about waterfalls. where was the picture taken? which waterfall did you write about or was it more a generi water fall poem? would also made a good Ode poem
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much! The inspiration was from waterfalls in general, not one in particular. Xoxo
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Comment from Daylily
Waterfalls are one of my favorite things. I could watch them all day long. Your poem presents them with emotions flowing down onto the rocks where a rainbow shows in the mist. That is very creative and poetically lovely.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Waterfalls are one of my favorite things. I could watch them all day long. Your poem presents them with emotions flowing down onto the rocks where a rainbow shows in the mist. That is very creative and poetically lovely.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Daylily!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. I particularly liked your use of personification. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. I particularly liked your use of personification. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes
Alex
Comment Written 03-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Alex!