Moonlit Dawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Footsteps"Humanity's next chapter after the fall of Earth
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
Although I have not read the previous chapters of your story I must say I can recognize good writing when I see it I also can understand your characters with just the bit that I read you have created a story it seems to me if I brave young man he's coming into a harsh world that's always a good way to begin or should I say a good theme. I see no issues with grammar sentence structure spelling punctuation or subject matter you've got a good entry here I think it was interesting to me and kept me engaged I wish you best of luck I hope your Christmas is great and your New year's is even better have a great night!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
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Although I have not read the previous chapters of your story I must say I can recognize good writing when I see it I also can understand your characters with just the bit that I read you have created a story it seems to me if I brave young man he's coming into a harsh world that's always a good way to begin or should I say a good theme. I see no issues with grammar sentence structure spelling punctuation or subject matter you've got a good entry here I think it was interesting to me and kept me engaged I wish you best of luck I hope your Christmas is great and your New year's is even better have a great night!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your honesty and kind words! I hope 2024 is treating you well, and maybe I'll see you around for future installments of Moonlit Dawn!
Comment from Jemma williams
I love this.
I'm new so thank you for giving me inspiration to learn and do more writing. I love learning and reading and your work is fulfilling and means alot xx keep going and know you're showing people the truth and spirit to be creative without fear of judgement
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
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I love this.
I'm new so thank you for giving me inspiration to learn and do more writing. I love learning and reading and your work is fulfilling and means alot xx keep going and know you're showing people the truth and spirit to be creative without fear of judgement
Comment Written 30-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
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You're too kind. Never be afraid to do what you love and write what you want! Hope you had a happy New Year's, and I'll see you in future installments of Moonlit Dawn!
