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Midnight's Whisper

Feelings in the darkness

9 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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It is certainly dark at night, even darker when it rains as the blacktop is hard to view when raining. It is creepy at night; I can feel the chills running up and down the spine.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Yep. Lol Thank you
Comment from Wendy G
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That is very atmospheric, and quietly beautiful, You have completed all the requirements very well and very smoothly. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I have know pitch black when on holiday in Turkey once and was unable to find my hotel because it was so dark. A fine post here bringing back some memories of a cold dark night alone, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you
Comment from Navada
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I really like your choice of imagery in this piece and the air of mystery it creates, particularly with the accompanying artwork. Thanks for the share and best of luck for the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much
Comment from Yusita
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You've nailed it with this one. Feelings are definitely evoked with this piece. I particularly liked the last line, and I noticed you even had an internal rhyme there. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much
Comment from Julie Helms
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I really enjoyed this entry for the ABC contest. You effectively gave the mood for creepy, And paired it with a perfect image. Good luck with the contest and happy new year!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Thank you
    Happy New year to you too
Comment from Sally Law
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Mysterious and haunting in this unique form of poetry, mystery poet. Looks like a contest winner to me. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming ABC contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Thank you so much
Comment from Mia Twysted
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It sounds like the beginning of a wonderful horror movie. They are out and suddenly it begins to get dark. That is really when the story starts. You have me wondering what happens next.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Thank you
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well written. I would just suggest that you go back to the home and the first word on line 5 should be in the stillness and you have a circumflex thing there so you need to check that.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Thank you.