Heart to Heart
Three line poem on love15 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
There are days in any relationship that we don't see eye to eye, but the heart will keep things on track. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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There are days in any relationship that we don't see eye to eye, but the heart will keep things on track. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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I?m happy you enjoyed this short one in speaking heart to heart! If only we all would.
Comment from Navada
You've summarised a beautiful truth here and I think your choice of artwork dovetails with your chosen words very effectively. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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You've summarised a beautiful truth here and I think your choice of artwork dovetails with your chosen words very effectively. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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I?m happy you got the gist of this short one. Honest communication is vital in maintaining relationships. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love the sentiment here in your clever three liner June and I reckon this is a winner for the contest, good luck, as long as our hearts connect we can overcome every argument, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Love the sentiment here in your clever three liner June and I reckon this is a winner for the contest, good luck, as long as our hearts connect we can overcome every argument, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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I?m happy you got the gist of this short one. Honest communication is vital in maintaining relationships. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning June,
I decided to go back into your portfolio to see your work as I am not getting any notices on messages??? So strange.
Anyway, this one is so lovely and yes so true. Really loved the message.
I wish you the very best of luck in the 3 Line Poetry Contest.
Great image too....
Lisasview
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Good morning June,
I decided to go back into your portfolio to see your work as I am not getting any notices on messages??? So strange.
Anyway, this one is so lovely and yes so true. Really loved the message.
I wish you the very best of luck in the 3 Line Poetry Contest.
Great image too....
Lisasview
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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I?m happy you got the gist of this short one. Honest communication is vital in maintaining relationships. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
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Good morning June,
I did and I really like your words dear June,
Lisa
Comment from BethShelby
I like this three line poem. These birds seem to have a way of communicating and these too look as if this might be an occasion when they aren't seeing eye to eye.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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I like this three line poem. These birds seem to have a way of communicating and these too look as if this might be an occasion when they aren't seeing eye to eye.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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I?m happy you got the gist of this short one. Honest communication is vital in maintaining relationships. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from Debbie Pope
Clearly, I really like this one, June. The art work speaks volumes to your theme. That lovely bird is looking away. It cannot look eye to eye. But still, those two birds are close enough to communicate through their presence. To me, that is what the poem is all about. You can keep lines of communication open by having an open heart--even when you have very different opinion.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Clearly, I really like this one, June. The art work speaks volumes to your theme. That lovely bird is looking away. It cannot look eye to eye. But still, those two birds are close enough to communicate through their presence. To me, that is what the poem is all about. You can keep lines of communication open by having an open heart--even when you have very different opinion.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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We don?t always see eye to eye with our loved ones, but honest and open communication is essential to maintaining human relationships. Glad you enjoyed this short one.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, June.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You make some good points about a relationship.
-It isn't always smooth sailing,
"but we can speak heart to heart."
-A good entry; good luck, and have a great 2024!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, June.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You make some good points about a relationship.
-It isn't always smooth sailing,
"but we can speak heart to heart."
-A good entry; good luck, and have a great 2024!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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We don?t always see eye to eye with our loved ones, but honest and open communication is essential to maintaining human relationships. Glad you enjoyed this short one.
Comment from Gloria ....
Those parrots really do seem to be engaged in an intense interaction. So true that we may not meet a consensus based on intellectual understanding, but we certainly can respect each other's intent/heart.
Very well done, and I love the artwork choice. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Those parrots really do seem to be engaged in an intense interaction. So true that we may not meet a consensus based on intellectual understanding, but we certainly can respect each other's intent/heart.
Very well done, and I love the artwork choice. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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We don?t always see eye to eye with our loved ones, but honest and open communication is essential to maintaining human relationships. Glad you enjoyed this short one.
Comment from lyenochka
I think using the plural pronoun, "We" satisfies the requirement of having to "address a loved one." This poem shows us that love overcomes differences of opinion because the lovebirds are connected in their hearts. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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I think using the plural pronoun, "We" satisfies the requirement of having to "address a loved one." This poem shows us that love overcomes differences of opinion because the lovebirds are connected in their hearts. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your thoughts. Always appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
Methinks this is true with many long term relationships.
From my view, it appears that your first line has a slightly larger text size than the two that follow.
I like Cleo's illustrations too for my FS posts.
Mark
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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June,
Methinks this is true with many long term relationships.
From my view, it appears that your first line has a slightly larger text size than the two that follow.
I like Cleo's illustrations too for my FS posts.
Mark
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your thoughts. Always appreciate the feedback.
