The Faith Continuum
Faith can be a rollercoaster ride13 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Navada,
This is a well formatted free verse using line length and line breaks well to show the ups and downs of life. It show how simple acts can change life from good to bad and vice versa. The artwork is and apt metaphor for the poem.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Hi Navada,
This is a well formatted free verse using line length and line breaks well to show the ups and downs of life. It show how simple acts can change life from good to bad and vice versa. The artwork is and apt metaphor for the poem.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Joan - much appreciated! :)
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Don?t mention it, Nevada.
Joan
Comment from mrsmajor
I'm with you, Nadava, thanks for sharing this with us...Indeed there are times when my heart aches, from the things life presents to us...Yet, each and every time, perhaps not at the time I might want, Father God sends a message, and all turns out for the better...Am I perfect, no I am not..but God still cares for me...What a thoughtful and meaningful poem...Blessings, and yes a Hug too!!!
(maybe even 2).
Good Luck in the Contest!
Warmly
Victoria
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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I'm with you, Nadava, thanks for sharing this with us...Indeed there are times when my heart aches, from the things life presents to us...Yet, each and every time, perhaps not at the time I might want, Father God sends a message, and all turns out for the better...Am I perfect, no I am not..but God still cares for me...What a thoughtful and meaningful poem...Blessings, and yes a Hug too!!!
(maybe even 2).
Good Luck in the Contest!
Warmly
Victoria
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much for this positive feedback and generous six stars, Victoria! :)
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The poem was a pleasure to read, You're very welcome to the 6 stars.
Blessings
Victoria
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this free verse poem. My favorite part was:
suddenly I'm giddy
stumbling, fumbling
grasping, clasping
We all go through small and large crises of faith, and it is awesome to know that faith will stabilize everything once more.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
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I liked reading this free verse poem. My favorite part was:
suddenly I'm giddy
stumbling, fumbling
grasping, clasping
We all go through small and large crises of faith, and it is awesome to know that faith will stabilize everything once more.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for the generous six stars! :)
Comment from June Sargent
We just need to hold onto that moral compass when we feel a little lost. Life's journey is never smooth. But we are guided if we allow ourselves Him to be the Leader.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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We just need to hold onto that moral compass when we feel a little lost. Life's journey is never smooth. But we are guided if we allow ourselves Him to be the Leader.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you, June. :)
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very beautiful poem that you have written on your faith. I enjoyed listening to it as it was being read aloud. It moves well, and it looks beautiful on the page. I wish you the very best.
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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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This is a very beautiful poem that you have written on your faith. I enjoyed listening to it as it was being read aloud. It moves well, and it looks beautiful on the page. I wish you the very best.
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Pat - Merry Christmas! :)
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Navada,
I appreciate your honesty on the subject of faith. I used to think that I was somehow flawed because I didn't embrace God the same way that some religious people did. It's a personal journey for sure, and it's up to us to reach out to the Lord for understanding and strength. Life is hard sometimes, but God never leaves us or forsakes us. Thanks so much for sharing this.
Have a blessed Christmas.
Tom
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Hello Navada,
I appreciate your honesty on the subject of faith. I used to think that I was somehow flawed because I didn't embrace God the same way that some religious people did. It's a personal journey for sure, and it's up to us to reach out to the Lord for understanding and strength. Life is hard sometimes, but God never leaves us or forsakes us. Thanks so much for sharing this.
Have a blessed Christmas.
Tom
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review and for the six generous stars, Tom - much appreciated! :)
Comment from BethShelby
You poem speak to me of my own life. I guess we are all flawed but thankfully God understands that. Life is a series of chapters in which emotions ebb ane flow, but faith remains a constant. This is an excellent poem.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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You poem speak to me of my own life. I guess we are all flawed but thankfully God understands that. Life is a series of chapters in which emotions ebb ane flow, but faith remains a constant. This is an excellent poem.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Beth! :)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
And are you brilliant and talented? A resounding YESSSS!!! This poem really resonated with me today. It's wise and frank and common sensical and (here comes that word again) Brilliant. Honestly, I have yet not to absolutely love anything you've posted on here. You're exceptional. You truly are. xo
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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And are you brilliant and talented? A resounding YESSSS!!! This poem really resonated with me today. It's wise and frank and common sensical and (here comes that word again) Brilliant. Honestly, I have yet not to absolutely love anything you've posted on here. You're exceptional. You truly are. xo
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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I so appreciate your positive feedback and your generous six stars - it means a great deal! xxx
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Truly, my pleasure! xo
Comment from JSD
A lovely response to the prompt. Well done. Your free verse speaks volumes about your faith and I admire your conviction. Well done and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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A lovely response to the prompt. Well done. Your free verse speaks volumes about your faith and I admire your conviction. Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much! :)
Comment from Wendy G
A very honest poem (and notes) of faith, and I feel sure that most of us will identify with your feelings. Perhaps those who don't might not be honest with themselves. Very few make a steady path upwards. But we can accept His offer of forgiveness and have certainty simply because He keeps His promises, thankfully. We don't want to then fall away again and try not to, but He knows our frailty and also our desire to please Him. I like your comparison with revolutions of a wheel, and with the facets of a diamond. I like too that you point out the value of a helping hand in times of darkness or confusion. Beautifully written in an original way. It's like hearing you think aloud. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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A very honest poem (and notes) of faith, and I feel sure that most of us will identify with your feelings. Perhaps those who don't might not be honest with themselves. Very few make a steady path upwards. But we can accept His offer of forgiveness and have certainty simply because He keeps His promises, thankfully. We don't want to then fall away again and try not to, but He knows our frailty and also our desire to please Him. I like your comparison with revolutions of a wheel, and with the facets of a diamond. I like too that you point out the value of a helping hand in times of darkness or confusion. Beautifully written in an original way. It's like hearing you think aloud. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for your detailed and thoughtful review, Wendy - much appreciated. :)