Light the Way
A story about a young man's ingenuity and bravery2 total reviews
Comment from Navada
This is a tragic situation that affects so many young people and they don't have a great deal of control over what happens to them. Dino showed great courage and self-determination to make his situation better. Good for him! :)
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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This is a tragic situation that affects so many young people and they don't have a great deal of control over what happens to them. Dino showed great courage and self-determination to make his situation better. Good for him! :)
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Hi Navada! Thank you for the excellent rating and your comments. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story. Have a merry Christmas season and blessed New Year!
Comment from Sandollar
I enjoyed this story. I love all the underdog wins in the end stories. I did think you rushed it a bit at the end. There was one mistake in the writing.
I listed it below. But all in all, a very good read.
"Did you do anything I asked? Like the put the casserole in the oven or finish the laundry?" You should remove one the.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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I enjoyed this story. I love all the underdog wins in the end stories. I did think you rushed it a bit at the end. There was one mistake in the writing.
I listed it below. But all in all, a very good read.
"Did you do anything I asked? Like the put the casserole in the oven or finish the laundry?" You should remove one the.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Hi! Thank you Sandollar, for your excellent rating and the feedback. I will go and fix that error. Have a blessed Christmas and a Happy New Year!
