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Fiery Look of Love

A contest entry.

8 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It sounds like you like a little bit of dangerous passion here Patricia and I enjoyed your magical one liner here. That fiery look certainly drew you in, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
    Thank you for your review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Is this about God? "It was the fiery look of love in his eyes, that melted my heart." Thank you for haring and good luck with your writings and the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
    Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. No the pool is not about God. It is a poem about my meeting of my husband.
Comment from BethShelby
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I like this. Firey look and melting heart are the words that mke this poem work . I think you have followed all the rules. Good luck in this contest. There are so many challenges out there to chose from. This is a neat one.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
    Thank you so much for your kind review. I do not normally enter a contest that requires money to be paid, but I decided this one was one I could forward to do.
Comment from Navada
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I like the combination of "fiery" and "melted", with the occurrence of one causing the other. I also like the dual imagery of fire and ice - a nice juxtaposition. Good luck for the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
    Thank you for your kind review and nice comments.
Comment from Carol Clark2
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Good use of metaphor for the contest. It's hard to tell a story or make an impact in one sentence, but the words you chose are great. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your kind of review. It?s always appreciate
Comment from Teri7
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Patricia, I wish I had six stars to give you for this great one line fire metaphor. You used great descriptive words that say so much. I love the color of blue you used also. Best wishes in the contest. love, blessings and Merry Christmas! Teri

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
    With a heart full of gratitude I wish to thank you for a nice review. Period
Comment from Wendyanne
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Hi Patricia. This is a nice piece of poetry in which you have used the metaphor of a fire in one sentence quite effectively!!! Good use of alliteration too. Good luck.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
    Thank you so much for your kind of review. I appreciate it
Comment from lyenochka
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Your one line poem reminds me of when you met your husband. I guess you both had that look of love and you felt in your hearts that you were the right one for each other. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
    Thank you so much Helen for the wonderful review. I appreciate it so very much. Have a blessed day and a good