Christmas Twinkle
2-4-4-12 poem8 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
When you look into the sky, you do feel some love shining in the twinkling of the stars. If Santa is flying through the sky in his sleigh, he does send love to the boys and girls as he says, Merry Christmas!
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When you look into the sky, you do feel some love shining in the twinkling of the stars. If Santa is flying through the sky in his sleigh, he does send love to the boys and girls as he says, Merry Christmas!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
Comment from Lisasview
Lovely poem witten in the Christmas spirit!!!
Always wonderful to read poems like these... Perfect use of the writing prompt.
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest,
Lisasview
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Lovely poem witten in the Christmas spirit!!!
Always wonderful to read poems like these... Perfect use of the writing prompt.
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest,
Lisasview
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
Comment from angel123
Your artwork choice is beautiful, and it enhances your message of Christmas! You followed the syllable count and good luck in the contest! Best wishes!
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Your artwork choice is beautiful, and it enhances your message of Christmas! You followed the syllable count and good luck in the contest! Best wishes!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
Comment from patcelaw
I enjoyed your poem very much and I wish you the very best in the contest. The only problem I have with this is that you use the dark red background with a black lettering and it's very difficult for people with vision problems to make out to text so you might decide to, use a lighter color background with the black lettering.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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I enjoyed your poem very much and I wish you the very best in the contest. The only problem I have with this is that you use the dark red background with a black lettering and it's very difficult for people with vision problems to make out to text so you might decide to, use a lighter color background with the black lettering.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Apologies. Background now changed, I hope this is better.
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a truly delightful, well written piece of poetry in 2-4-4-12 style. I love the image of elves sending a message of love through the twinkling of the stars. Very beautiful. Good luck.
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This is a truly delightful, well written piece of poetry in 2-4-4-12 style. I love the image of elves sending a message of love through the twinkling of the stars. Very beautiful. Good luck.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
Comment from jmdg1954
There hasn't been a 2-4-4-12 entry I've read that I haven't enjoyed.
It's almost like I can see Santa and his sleigh in the background .
Best of luck in the contest.
John
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There hasn't been a 2-4-4-12 entry I've read that I haven't enjoyed.
It's almost like I can see Santa and his sleigh in the background .
Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
Comment from JSD
A sweet response to another crazy prompt. You have managed successfully to convey an image of the season in a cute message with appropriate artwork. Well done and good luck.
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A sweet response to another crazy prompt. You have managed successfully to convey an image of the season in a cute message with appropriate artwork. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
Comment from Navada
What lovely imagery to help us reflect on the hard work of the elves and how much their work is appreciated by children everywhere! Nice touch to link this with the night sky where the reindeer and Santa deliver the products of the elves' labour. :)
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What lovely imagery to help us reflect on the hard work of the elves and how much their work is appreciated by children everywhere! Nice touch to link this with the night sky where the reindeer and Santa deliver the products of the elves' labour. :)
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
