Monitored
You only think you have a secret12 total reviews
Comment from Andrea Kepple
Your poem made me smile this morning.
I like how you were able to make the lines rhyme in this short of a poem.
I also like the rhythm of the second line that feels like someone walking along a path.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Your poem made me smile this morning.
I like how you were able to make the lines rhyme in this short of a poem.
I also like the rhythm of the second line that feels like someone walking along a path.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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I always appreciate it so much when a reviewer is specific about what "hit" with them. Thank you for helping to make me aware of what appealed with this one.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
When you look through the blinds what do you see? I'm sure that it's something that you don't want to be a part of, because usually you are spying on someone you'll not agree with.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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When you look through the blinds what do you see? I'm sure that it's something that you don't want to be a part of, because usually you are spying on someone you'll not agree with.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Yeah, because otherwise, what is the point of spying, right? Spying is for that quintessential vicarious thrill!! Thanks for a terrific review.
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your cleverly written short poem. It flows well with good alliteration of w words and sounds. Your artwork choice enhances your well-received message of monitored. I think you should promote this poem more. It will awaken writers-block for some. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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I enjoyed reading your cleverly written short poem. It flows well with good alliteration of w words and sounds. Your artwork choice enhances your well-received message of monitored. I think you should promote this poem more. It will awaken writers-block for some. Best wishes!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thanks for the review. I'm saving my FS dollars for something I'm going to post this weekend.
Comment from jaded831
Excellent, by far yours has the most creativity. I am a sucker for murder mysteries,
your poem makes me want to read a good mystery again. According to the picture you never know who's watching. Have a great holiday.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Excellent, by far yours has the most creativity. I am a sucker for murder mysteries,
your poem makes me want to read a good mystery again. According to the picture you never know who's watching. Have a great holiday.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Well, you have to know I just LOVE this review!!! Thanks very much, Jaded831! I appreciate your kind words. xo
Comment from lyenochka
That's a great use of every word in this super brief form. I like how you incorporated all those question words and we writers should all be like a spy who observes everything to write it down. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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That's a great use of every word in this super brief form. I like how you incorporated all those question words and we writers should all be like a spy who observes everything to write it down. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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I knew you'd understand!! Thank you for that!
Comment from Yardier
Scary thought! I hope it's not true. It seems every where one goes someone or something is watching, and gathering information.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Scary thought! I hope it's not true. It seems every where one goes someone or something is watching, and gathering information.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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It's really the case, isn't it? There is ALWAYS someone nearby with a cellphone camera to catch the action.
Comment from Wendyanne
This is great! I love the way you have managed to describe what a spy does with just eight syllables and you have even made the words rhyme. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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This is great! I love the way you have managed to describe what a spy does with just eight syllables and you have even made the words rhyme. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thanks very much!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Spying is an art that we humans have become adept in and each country spies on the other, a fun post for the contest, much enjoyed, and good luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Spying is an art that we humans have become adept in and each country spies on the other, a fun post for the contest, much enjoyed, and good luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thanks very much!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well if that is not a shot of the good ol' creepy right in the arm. I mean, even the guy in your picture looks mighty teched.
Good luck in the 1!6!1 competition. Hopefully this takes you to the podium!
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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Well if that is not a shot of the good ol' creepy right in the arm. I mean, even the guy in your picture looks mighty teched.
Good luck in the 1!6!1 competition. Hopefully this takes you to the podium!
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Sometimes, creepy is all that will satisfy the muse! Thanks for a very fun review.
Comment from Wy Jung
Hey Google/Siri/Alexa ...will you read this out loud to me...?
:D
It's a scary time we live in. I enjoyed this 1 6 1
The flow was nice. Picture goes well and it fits the prompt.
***** stars
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Hey Google/Siri/Alexa ...will you read this out loud to me...?
:D
It's a scary time we live in. I enjoyed this 1 6 1
The flow was nice. Picture goes well and it fits the prompt.
***** stars
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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HAHAHAHAH. You slay me, Wy Jung! This is a really fun review. Thanks for you encouragement as well as the humor.
