2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "My Passion "-
10 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
This one didn't hold back. The desire and passion was bold and unmistakable. Beautiful imagery with the horses running across the prairie fields. Awesome post. Gretchen
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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This one didn't hold back. The desire and passion was bold and unmistakable. Beautiful imagery with the horses running across the prairie fields. Awesome post. Gretchen
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Gretchen,
it's always good to hear from you. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. I loved the pictures of the stallion made into a unicorn with the shadow of a horn thusly so and the second stallion facing the other way. Your delightful poem instilled the poem of riding a stallion. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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What a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. I loved the pictures of the stallion made into a unicorn with the shadow of a horn thusly so and the second stallion facing the other way. Your delightful poem instilled the poem of riding a stallion. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Gloria ....
Unbridled passion presented here in pleasing tones of green and gold as only can be within dreams.
Another excellent addition to your tanka collection, Gypsy. :)
Gloria
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Unbridled passion presented here in pleasing tones of green and gold as only can be within dreams.
Another excellent addition to your tanka collection, Gypsy. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am wondering if the person you're writing about can tame you. I am betting not. LOL This poem crossed the barrier of not being so innocent. LOL It's a wonderful poem and, again, presentation.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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I am wondering if the person you're writing about can tame you. I am betting not. LOL This poem crossed the barrier of not being so innocent. LOL It's a wonderful poem and, again, presentation.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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LoL. Sorry, I don't know what I was thinking about.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
hehheh nice imagery of riding the horse lol!
and across verdant prairies, too...
nice one! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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hehheh nice imagery of riding the horse lol!
and across verdant prairies, too...
nice one! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Everyone of your poems is fantastic. You have such wonderful and appealing coloration, and the words are so meaningful. The images are so greatly appealing.
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Everyone of your poems is fantastic. You have such wonderful and appealing coloration, and the words are so meaningful. The images are so greatly appealing.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
Woohoo! Is it hot in here?
This is sssssizzzzzzling!
You are so right!
That Spanish passion lends itself well to the Tanka!
Wine, anyone?
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Woohoo! Is it hot in here?
This is sssssizzzzzzling!
You are so right!
That Spanish passion lends itself well to the Tanka!
Wine, anyone?
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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LoL. I would love to have a glass of wine with you.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, sister.
Love you,
Marival
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We could meet in the middle.... If we were mermaids!
(smiling)
Comment from lyenochka
I don't know why but I feel like the second line should be "can't be tamed." It's a good metaphor to be wild and free like wild horses. But if the horse is wild, can one ride it?
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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I don't know why but I feel like the second line should be "can't be tamed." It's a good metaphor to be wild and free like wild horses. But if the horse is wild, can one ride it?
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Yes, I changed that to tamed, thank you.
Thank you very much, big sister. May you have a wonderful day.
Love
Marival
Comment from Wy Jung
6 stars for this.
5 stars for the beginning and the final star being for that last line!
Passion unbridled. Great picture to go along with the thought as well.
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6 stars for this.
5 stars for the beginning and the final star being for that last line!
Passion unbridled. Great picture to go along with the thought as well.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Navada
Well, this one certainly engages the more sensual aspects of a relationship. :) Wild horses clearly couldn't drag you away from your beloved. I liked the imagery here and it is certainly powerful. Kudos!
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Well, this one certainly engages the more sensual aspects of a relationship. :) Wild horses clearly couldn't drag you away from your beloved. I liked the imagery here and it is certainly powerful. Kudos!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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LoL. Thank you. (*÷*) I appreciate your exceptional review and kind words. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
