Lace Hearts
Free Verse club entry42 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this. My favorite stanza was:
My child, you were made
from love so strong and pure,
uniquely woven, delicate
and rare.
When a three-year-old could write a whole sentence, you must have wondered if you had another great writer on your hands (smile).
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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I liked reading this. My favorite stanza was:
My child, you were made
from love so strong and pure,
uniquely woven, delicate
and rare.
When a three-year-old could write a whole sentence, you must have wondered if you had another great writer on your hands (smile).
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, I love this comment. She is now ten and is in fact a writer!:) At eight years old, she had a poem published by Young Writers of America. I am a proud Mommy. :) Thank you for your kind words.
Xo
Comment from Julie Helms
This is stunningly beautiful. So well crafted throughout. I'm especially moved by it right now with the recent birth of my first granddaughter... It brought tears to my eyes! Thank you for writing this!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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This is stunningly beautiful. So well crafted throughout. I'm especially moved by it right now with the recent birth of my first granddaughter... It brought tears to my eyes! Thank you for writing this!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Oh, Julie that means so much to me! Thank you for this lovely review, and congratulations on your first granddaughter!!! Xoxo
Comment from Bicpen
It is a good poem in its objectivity however I feel the subjectivity could have been more forceful and thorough though simplicity is best it weaves without breathing in construction however the sentiment is acknowledged and reminds of the care we take love sown and grown for this is its mind portraying all due care and diligence in its write and for this it is rewarded .... however personally I think its a four for me !
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It is a good poem in its objectivity however I feel the subjectivity could have been more forceful and thorough though simplicity is best it weaves without breathing in construction however the sentiment is acknowledged and reminds of the care we take love sown and grown for this is its mind portraying all due care and diligence in its write and for this it is rewarded .... however personally I think its a four for me !
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Interesting way to describe love that last over time:"
In every cherished moment,
and in each one to come
forever laced, you'll be,
in all my love.
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Interesting way to describe love that last over time:"
In every cherished moment,
and in each one to come
forever laced, you'll be,
in all my love.
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much! :)
Xo
Jessica
Comment from BermyBye50
Jessica,
This is a beautifully written poem entry for the "Lace" event in the Fabulous Free Versers Club". Your entry is exquisitely written and perfectly captures the sentiments of the theme of your poem. Each stanza is exceptional and speaks to the miracle of a mother's love at the birth of a new baby through early childhood. This is a wonderful addition to my collection of bookcased poems here on Fanstory.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Jessica,
This is a beautifully written poem entry for the "Lace" event in the Fabulous Free Versers Club". Your entry is exquisitely written and perfectly captures the sentiments of the theme of your poem. Each stanza is exceptional and speaks to the miracle of a mother's love at the birth of a new baby through early childhood. This is a wonderful addition to my collection of bookcased poems here on Fanstory.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Eugene, I am deeply grateful for your kind words and valued insight. Thank you so much!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a beautiful and poignant free verse for the Lace challenge, Jessica. I loved that you start off with a loving couple and then you go into the wonder of motherhood.
forever laced you'll be
in all my love
great lines, and well done.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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This is a beautiful and poignant free verse for the Lace challenge, Jessica. I loved that you start off with a loving couple and then you go into the wonder of motherhood.
forever laced you'll be
in all my love
great lines, and well done.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Valda!
Comment from poetwatch
After reading your exquisite way of dedicating your love to a child of your own, Jessica, even I would call you mommy. :) It's a very moving poem. I see your heart and it is very lovely. I only wish I knew how to write like you. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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After reading your exquisite way of dedicating your love to a child of your own, Jessica, even I would call you mommy. :) It's a very moving poem. I see your heart and it is very lovely. I only wish I knew how to write like you. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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This comment made my whole week! Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a great deal to me! Xo
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jessica,
This is a wonder free verse about marital love and love for a child. Both are intertwined as you all will be for the rest of your lives. I like how lace is woven in all the sections.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Hi Jessica,
This is a wonder free verse about marital love and love for a child. Both are intertwined as you all will be for the rest of your lives. I like how lace is woven in all the sections.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Joan, thank you so much! I'm honored. Happy holidays, to you!
Xo
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You?re welcome and thank you, Jessica.
Joan
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh my goodness!! What a BEAUTIFUL poem! It feels as if I am being gently rocked by the even tempo and lulling words of love and caring. You have done a terrific job here. Very enjoyable read from beginning to end. xo
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Oh my goodness!! What a BEAUTIFUL poem! It feels as if I am being gently rocked by the even tempo and lulling words of love and caring. You have done a terrific job here. Very enjoyable read from beginning to end. xo
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, my friend! I truly appreciate that! Xoxo
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My pleasure!
Comment from Douglas Goff
What an awesome, sweet, and wonderful tribute to your child. There really is no love like the love of a mother for her child.
You have a talented knack for always picking the exact right words for your works. I enjoy reading your offerings.
Very good,
D
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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What an awesome, sweet, and wonderful tribute to your child. There really is no love like the love of a mother for her child.
You have a talented knack for always picking the exact right words for your works. I enjoy reading your offerings.
Very good,
D
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Oh, thank you so much, Douglas! That truly means a lot! Xoxo