Moonlit Dawn
Viewing comments for Prologue "Sage and Prodigy"Humanity's next chapter after the fall of Earth
2 total reviews
Comment from JSD
A great opening and starting point for a story. Your characters intrigue and the style you have adopted is most engaging. Well done and welcome to FanStory. I hope you enjoy your time here.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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A great opening and starting point for a story. Your characters intrigue and the style you have adopted is most engaging. Well done and welcome to FanStory. I hope you enjoy your time here.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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That?s so kind of you! Thank you for the specificity in your comments, and I hope you enjoy the story moving forward!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderful story that you have shared with us, and I appreciate it very much. It kept my attention all the way through and I appreciate the fact that as a first post you have done a wonderful job I wish you the very best with all of your writing here on this site. May God bless you and may you have a wonderful and merry Christmas and a most prosperous and happy new year Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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This is a wonderful story that you have shared with us, and I appreciate it very much. It kept my attention all the way through and I appreciate the fact that as a first post you have done a wonderful job I wish you the very best with all of your writing here on this site. May God bless you and may you have a wonderful and merry Christmas and a most prosperous and happy new year Patricia
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your kind words! I hope you look forward to the story moving forward, and have a happy holidays!
