Knowledge of God
The true necessity of life8 total reviews
Comment from BenThrone
This is an interesting, one might say bold, entry for the "Class Is in Session" contest, which instructed entrants to "teach your fellow Fanstorians something they did not already know." Within that context, this would appear to be proselytizing; outside that context, it could be seen simply as a declaration of faith (the two are not the same, at least not from my perspective). I would be curious to know how this did in the contest, which is over now if I'm not mistaken.
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This is an interesting, one might say bold, entry for the "Class Is in Session" contest, which instructed entrants to "teach your fellow Fanstorians something they did not already know." Within that context, this would appear to be proselytizing; outside that context, it could be seen simply as a declaration of faith (the two are not the same, at least not from my perspective). I would be curious to know how this did in the contest, which is over now if I'm not mistaken.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2024
Comment from Sabrina H.
First off, welcome to FanStory and congratulations on your first post. It's beautifully written and inspirational. It has great flow and no grammar errors that I saw. Best of luck for your entry.
Best wishes:)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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First off, welcome to FanStory and congratulations on your first post. It's beautifully written and inspirational. It has great flow and no grammar errors that I saw. Best of luck for your entry.
Best wishes:)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you, how beautiful you are to make one feel welcome. Your comments are so appreciated.
Comment from Janis M.
Fortunately, most of us here do know quite a bit about the Lord, but it is never a bad time to share even to that one person who may not be acquainted. The meter and rhyme here work and flow well together.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Fortunately, most of us here do know quite a bit about the Lord, but it is never a bad time to share even to that one person who may not be acquainted. The meter and rhyme here work and flow well together.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from JanPerry
I enjoyed your first entry in Fanstory but I didn't learn something new as in the criteria of the contest. I'm sure it's under 200 words.
You have lovely expressions.
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I enjoyed your first entry in Fanstory but I didn't learn something new as in the criteria of the contest. I'm sure it's under 200 words.
You have lovely expressions.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
Comment from Claire Tennant
This is a beautiful reminder of who God is: the Creator, the Artist, the all-wise won. For those who believe (like me), it is a reminder of whom we belong to. For those who wish to learn these words whet appetites and spur interest. A lovely contribution. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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This is a beautiful reminder of who God is: the Creator, the Artist, the all-wise won. For those who believe (like me), it is a reminder of whom we belong to. For those who wish to learn these words whet appetites and spur interest. A lovely contribution. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Thank you. I'm so happy to hear your on our Lords side. If only all believed and lived Holiness, could you imagine the beauty of it. God bless.
Comment from patcelaw
Since this is your first post, I want to welcome you to fan story. It will be a blessing to us to hear your work and just read your work. I'm hoping that our work will be a blessing to you as well. Have a good day, and God bless.d Pat
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Since this is your first post, I want to welcome you to fan story. It will be a blessing to us to hear your work and just read your work. I'm hoping that our work will be a blessing to you as well. Have a good day, and God bless.d Pat
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Thank you much.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Welcome to the Fanstory community of writers. We are glad you have joined us. Congratulations of this your first post, a verse that is well rhymed as it outlines the many reasons to believe. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Welcome to the Fanstory community of writers. We are glad you have joined us. Congratulations of this your first post, a verse that is well rhymed as it outlines the many reasons to believe. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Thank you, means a lot to me.
Comment from jim vecchio
Congratulations on this Milestone Post! I am thankful you honored The Lord in this first entry. I believe your meter is off, but I'm disregarding that, as I have a lot to learn about meter myself. There are a few grammatical error that should be corrected before the committee votes on this. In order: Line 3: no period after "praise." Line 4 should be plural due to previous "we". To keep the rhyme scheme, something like: "For all that we can see". Line 5: "blaze" needs no apostrophe. Line 7: "all the stars that fill the sky" Line 11: "nature, trees, growing flowers".
Keep up the good writing!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Congratulations on this Milestone Post! I am thankful you honored The Lord in this first entry. I believe your meter is off, but I'm disregarding that, as I have a lot to learn about meter myself. There are a few grammatical error that should be corrected before the committee votes on this. In order: Line 3: no period after "praise." Line 4 should be plural due to previous "we". To keep the rhyme scheme, something like: "For all that we can see". Line 5: "blaze" needs no apostrophe. Line 7: "all the stars that fill the sky" Line 11: "nature, trees, growing flowers".
Keep up the good writing!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much.
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Keep on writing!
