Thoughts of You
Desiring the more2 total reviews
Comment from Navada
I like the rhyming scheme you've employed here and the visual image is lovely. For the sake of many readers here who don't have top notch eyesight, I think it's a good idea to increase your font size and consider using a different colour so it's easier to read. Good luck for the contest.
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I like the rhyming scheme you've employed here and the visual image is lovely. For the sake of many readers here who don't have top notch eyesight, I think it's a good idea to increase your font size and consider using a different colour so it's easier to read. Good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Mercy is to be praised and I enjoyed the sentiment here. Your words are hardly visible and I had to zoom right in to read this poem. I would adjust the shading, love Dolly x x x
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Mercy is to be praised and I enjoyed the sentiment here. Your words are hardly visible and I had to zoom right in to read this poem. I would adjust the shading, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
