Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this description of these two. I think it's almost every young girl's fantasy. It was mine when I was young. Maybe I was strange. LOL This is another beautiful presentation.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Not strange at all, many young people fantasy, I think girls more than boys. I'm glad you like it (*=*) Thank you!

Gypsy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Very cool poem. I felt like I could see each of them individually. The Armour of flames was so very powerful. This sounds like a passionate love shared between them. Gretchen

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

thank you, Gerchen, I'm always very grateful for your reviews.

gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

they have the same eyes!

great couple's gogyohka!
always has each other's backs
love the his and her thoughts
smooth flow throughout
and love the royal colours, too

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Although the first stanza probably needs a colour change on the font, it's a little faint. Beautifully written though, everything that you is very good, seeing you post so many, it's fantastic, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 28-Nov-2023

Well done

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

They are quite the pair and look like that belong in some fantasy tale which I'm sure you can narrate for us with lots of rich imagery which you write so well!

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Yes, I was going for a fantasy poem.... something different.

Thank you very much for your excellent review, big sister.

Love

Marival