A Long Farewell
A lonely cemetery visit40 total reviews
Comment from T.A. Walk
This is another great piece!
Somehow odd that I've always been alone in a cemetery outside of funerals...
The image and the words fit perfectly together.
Beautifully done!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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This is another great piece!
Somehow odd that I've always been alone in a cemetery outside of funerals...
The image and the words fit perfectly together.
Beautifully done!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you for reviewing this one. I'm glad you like it.
Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
A week away from my computer has put me well behind on my reading and reviews, but I'm racing to make sure I don't leave any of my regulars out. I've missed seeing what my favorite writer's minds have been twisted up in. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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A week away from my computer has put me well behind on my reading and reviews, but I'm racing to make sure I don't leave any of my regulars out. I've missed seeing what my favorite writer's minds have been twisted up in. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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I know you aren't big fan of poetry so don't feel obligated. I don't really consider these short thing poetry but I trying to learn to do them and I do appreciate your reading them
Beth
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I enjoy everything you write no matter what it is, poetry or prose. It's the way you look at and express things. :-)
Comment from Michael Groover
Your haiku paints a poignant picture of solitude and aging. The choice of words creates a sense of melancholy and reflection. Well-crafted!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Your haiku paints a poignant picture of solitude and aging. The choice of words creates a sense of melancholy and reflection. Well-crafted!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you Michael, I appreciate the review and comments. I was hoping for a that sort impression.
Beth
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Rhonda,
These three shot lines match the artwork well. It reminds us how lonely and sad it can be to visit graves.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Hi Rhonda,
These three shot lines match the artwork well. It reminds us how lonely and sad it can be to visit graves.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great weekend
Joan
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you Joan, I appreciate the review and nice comments.
Beth
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No problem, Beth.
Joan
Comment from Terry Broxson
Beth, this is a good poem for this contest. In the past, I have done some genealogy research that took me to some older gravesites for some information. There is no lonelier path than an old graveyard. Nicely done. Terry.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Beth, this is a good poem for this contest. In the past, I have done some genealogy research that took me to some older gravesites for some information. There is no lonelier path than an old graveyard. Nicely done. Terry.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Terry, I appreciate the review and comment. I like genealogy too and I've visited a lot of graves copying names and dates of my anscestors.
Beth
Comment from Jacob1395
The sadness is captured well in your writing, Beth and you create a very haunting atmosphere with your words as well. A really well written and a well constructed piece. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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The sadness is captured well in your writing, Beth and you create a very haunting atmosphere with your words as well. A really well written and a well constructed piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you Jacob. I was hoping I capured a hint of sadness.
Beth
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, sad and thought provoking. I thought
about walking through a cemetery and those gone. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork goes well with these words.
Have a great day!....Maria
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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The author's words are heartfelt, sad and thought provoking. I thought
about walking through a cemetery and those gone. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork goes well with these words.
Have a great day!....Maria
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you Maria, It really appreciate the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent 3-line poem Beth. The tone was set in the artwork but your well chosen words draw the reader into the somber scene.
Very well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Excellent 3-line poem Beth. The tone was set in the artwork but your well chosen words draw the reader into the somber scene.
Very well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you Janet. I appreiate your comments.
Beth
Comment from Douglas Goff
3 Line Poetry Contest Home Run!
I mean, it doesn't hurt that I love cemeteries. It's the o Lu place you can walk through a history book.
The picture and color scheme you developed created a great atmosphere for this piece.
Great!
D
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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3 Line Poetry Contest Home Run!
I mean, it doesn't hurt that I love cemeteries. It's the o Lu place you can walk through a history book.
The picture and color scheme you developed created a great atmosphere for this piece.
Great!
D
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you Douglas. I enjoy walking through cemeteries as well. In this haiku, I hoped to make the visit a sad one.
Betj
Comment from Sally Law
Wow. I can certainly feel the sadness in this one. Wonderfully penned and illustrated in three line poetry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Wow. I can certainly feel the sadness in this one. Wonderfully penned and illustrated in three line poetry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Thank you Sally. I hoped there would be a feeling of sadness with this one. I appreciate the review.
Beth
