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Guided by Faith

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Can faith guide our path?

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Comment from Andy Kovacs
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Real responces for coming into the story line in the middle I felt the story's correctors'. You are a very experienced writer with alot of feeling. Love what I read. and will read more. Im hooked. Andre K.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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A week away from my computer has put me well behind on my reading and reviews, but I'm racing to make sure I don't leave any of my regulars out. I've missed seeing what my favorite writer's minds have been twisted up in. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
    You're sweet, thank you.
Comment from w.j.debi
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When we consider that Emma and Seth have only known each other for less than a month, things are progressing quickly. They are destined for each other and feel all the angst of their emotions getting in the way. That and all those crazy life-altering revelations and day-to-day complications. You keep us guessing.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
    Life does tend to get in the way. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
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Finally, Seth was able to say all that he's feeling about Emma. Boy, it took him long enough! But I guess he and Emma had a lot to work out and digest before understanding their own feelings first. I can see why you had to divide this chapter as it would have been too long. I felt the climax of the plot here and soon they will have a resolution and maybe even a kiss!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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This is a great character growth chapter. I am glad you cleared the dog thing up about his bark/growl because I had thought about how well officers know their K-9s different sounds. I didn't broach it because it seemed mi or and something that only cops would know. Good job!
D

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
    Seth knew, he was just wrapped in his feelings for Emma and didn't pay attention. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendyanne
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I enjoyed reading this chapter of your book as I have read a few of them but not all of them. You have made the characters believable. I look forward to reading the next chapter

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Lisasview
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Good evening dear Barbara from getting late here in Spain,
This is so good... I think I missed a few before but I will go back and look... even so I am able to more or less catch up... Reading this it all seems so true...so real...
Thank you for sharing,
Lisa

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Lisasview on 28-Nov-2023
    You are so very welcome Barbara..
    I enjoyed reviewing it..
    Lisa
Comment from Sanku
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Emma's sensitivity would try anyone ,but Seth is so patient with her and understand her. I think Emma should make an attempt to be more open minded. Seth'character has come out very well.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
    Thank you for the kind review. Emma is going to work on this.
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello BARBARA.WILKEY,
It's a nice piece of Romance Fiction having smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
The story is moving forward in an interesting way, and making me wait for the next part - Good sign for a good novel!
Best of Luck!

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
    Thank you for the encouragement.
reply by RPSaxena on 28-Nov-2023
    Most Welcome!
    ~ RP
Comment from Wendy G
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I am glad Seth insisted on a talk. Emma seems to jump to the wrong conclusion too quickly sometimes. Well done.
Wendy
Edit: "You just got out of the hospital you shouldn't go in tomorrow." (Punctuation: two sentences or else a dash after "hospital")

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
    I added a comma and a probably. Thank you for the suggestion. I always appreciate the help.