Murmurations
Startling Unity!35 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
That's a very cool poem. Short or long you how to make magic! It's very cool and goes great with your Palm. I think he got A cool poem here. I find submission I wish you an amazing day!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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That's a very cool poem. Short or long you how to make magic! It's very cool and goes great with your Palm. I think he got A cool poem here. I find submission I wish you an amazing day!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Lea! It was on our news this morning (in amongst all the other dire stuff) and I couldn't resist. It kind of lifts your heart. Yours was an amazing write this morning. Well done! Debbie x
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have seen a murmuration and it is quite magnificent. I was one in an aeroplane and we spotted on in the air, you brought the experience to life here, how magical is nature, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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I have seen a murmuration and it is quite magnificent. I was one in an aeroplane and we spotted on in the air, you brought the experience to life here, how magical is nature, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly! I don't know if you saw it on the news this morning but you just stop everything you're doing in wonder at such incredible unity and artful purpose. Take care Debbie x PS Well done at reaching #1 in reviewer's ranking! You're working so hard.
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I had no idea I was number on reviewing, ha ha ha, I dont? take much notice of that, I just review to promote, ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment from Sally Law
A poem with a double meaning. I love those. There's a lot in this one that's open for interpretation. Wonderfully written and illustrated by your talented hand. Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes for the haiku poetry contest.
Sal XOs
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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A poem with a double meaning. I love those. There's a lot in this one that's open for interpretation. Wonderfully written and illustrated by your talented hand. Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes for the haiku poetry contest.
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Sally! I'm delighted you enjoyed and grateful, as ever, for your support and kindness! Debbie xos
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wow!! Seriously, I cannot even count the number of times you have made me smarter this year with your posts!! I always learn something --usually a LOT of somethings!-- about celebrities and famous authors from you. And now, I'm also learning about nature!
I'm just glad, though, that Tippi Hedron isn't alive to read this. I fear she would not give you a loving review... xoxox
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Wow!! Seriously, I cannot even count the number of times you have made me smarter this year with your posts!! I always learn something --usually a LOT of somethings!-- about celebrities and famous authors from you. And now, I'm also learning about nature!
I'm just glad, though, that Tippi Hedron isn't alive to read this. I fear she would not give you a loving review... xoxox
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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That was mighty quick. Gosh you're on the ball. I must get myself a dose of Covid:)) Thank you so much, Elle! Actually I think my brain has gone. I just can't get myself round to another biography and I should have started by now! Who's the late Tippi Hedron and should I fear anyone else? Debbie xos
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Tippi Hedron was the actress in Alfred Hitchcock's thriller, "The Birds."
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Also, regarding writing another biography, you could always do it one quattrain at a time and call it a "collection" of poems about your next famous person. I've heard that that's a very well-supported method of FS poetry of late!
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Ha ha! You're right. Far less taxing too!
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Oh God, I should have known that!
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Yes! Gives you a greater chance to win an end-of-year trophy, too, if you promote like a nut!! Not that anyone would do that, of course...
Comment from Paul Manton
A great haiku! Only today on BBC news we saw a murmuration of several thousand starlings, so you are right up to date!
Well, assonance, consonance and alliteration all rolled together in this accomplished piece.
So worth a six, my clever friend - and good luck in the competition.
Paul
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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A great haiku! Only today on BBC news we saw a murmuration of several thousand starlings, so you are right up to date!
Well, assonance, consonance and alliteration all rolled together in this accomplished piece.
So worth a six, my clever friend - and good luck in the competition.
Paul
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Oh Paul, I didn't expect that! Thank you sooo much! I saw it too on the news (amongst all the other dire stuff) and couldn't resist. This sight, together with flights of geese, is so remarkable and inspiring. The contest is ages away which is the best way, I think, to treat them:) Well done again on yours. Did you ever get clarification? Debbie x
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Still waiting, Debbie.
Tomorrow I am applying for an overdraft! My housing benefit is cancelled by mistake and my phone stopped working two hours ago. Not my favorite day - BUT I am just about to make spaghetti bolognese - so the end of the day will be better!
Love from Paul
